Expanding The Moment
A moment without thoughts2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how your poem captures the passage of time. "Opened doors" feels so powerful. Your words flow so smoothly and there's something calming about the way you present the idea of time. It's a reminder to appreciate the now. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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I love how your poem captures the passage of time. "Opened doors" feels so powerful. Your words flow so smoothly and there's something calming about the way you present the idea of time. It's a reminder to appreciate the now. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
If the moment is expanding where will my thoughts go?
The poetic are deep in my process of understanding.
Yet presently your words emulated the perfect Lune poetry poem contest entry.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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If the moment is expanding where will my thoughts go?
The poetic are deep in my process of understanding.
Yet presently your words emulated the perfect Lune poetry poem contest entry.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Thoughts are like waves. As one thought crests another thought begins. In between there is a moment where there are no thoughts. It is that moment that expands. This is know as thoughtless awareness...
