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Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet

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Miranda finds herself in another situation.

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Comment from BethShelby
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It sounds like Miranda has her site on Terrance's mom and she believes she might be capable of murder is someone is harming her son. Miranda is envolved in everything and she believes Mitch thinks to logically.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
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Ah the blond woman enters the fray, how interesting, Miranda knows her targets, she perceives things above the norm, she herself touches on a few passionate female propensities herself, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Thank you, Roy. I greatly appreciate this wonderful review. You truly understand Miranda's character. Gretchen
reply by royowen on 21-Jan-2025
    Good job
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Gretchen,
I think Miranda is much bolder than many folks, but it appears she's also rather impulsive. I don't know what she hoped to accomplish by going over to the house, except to verify that the boy's mom was a blond. If a teacher ever came on to one of my kids, I'm not sure what my reaction would have been, but I could see where things could get out of control. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much, Tom. Miranda is much, much bolder than most. That's why she is constantly in peril. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Ohhh, whoa!! The Excellence just does not let up!! This is so fantastic!! I don't know very many moms who wouldn't defend their cubs to the death. This is a brilliant facet! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Xo

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Thank you, Rachelle. I sometimes wish I could plan out a chapter, but I'm more comfortable winging it. I have no earthly idea what is going to happen next. Miranda is gonna kill me before its all over. Lol. Gretchen
reply by Rachelle Allen on 21-Jan-2025
    No way; you're a bulldozer!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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We now have a suspect. I'm wondering if Miranda can convince Mitch of that. I know he won't be happy she's interfering, but he knows her pretty well by now. I enjoyed reading this and couldn't find any way to improve it.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much! Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Yes, ma'am, a mama bear, and this one sounds like a real . . . well, you know. But it's obvious that Miranda has just stirred the pot. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much, Ric. I think she even scared Miranda. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
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Oh! this is a new turning .Hope she shares it with the Police Otherwise he is going to be upset. Miranda should get a job with the police department . The story is getting interesting ...

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Jim Wile
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Miranda seems to have found a definite suspect now in Terence's mother, who was likely the blond lady seen arguing with Tomlin in the parking lot of the school. This is getting exciting now as Miranda is on the warpath. She may not like Dougie very much, but she and Waylon both know he isn't a killer.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Is this Terence a suspect here Gretchen? I think, perhaps Miranda should have consulted Mitch, but she can be a bit hot headed and unprepared. A can of worms may have been opened here in your story Gretchen. Another interesting chapter, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Quite honestly I think most mothers would want kill anyone who harmed their children. I would! Whether I could actually do the deed or not is a different matter. But I'm make sure he hurt big time.
I'm glad that Waylon knows now about how his father got hurt and about Tomlin, it was best to tell him now than him finding out by a reporter. This was a really good chapter, Gretchen, I'm sorry I don't have any sixes left, you know I would have given it one. Roll out the next chapter!! Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much, Sandra. Gretchen