Burn It All Down
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "The Hunters Gambit"A war of a few against a syndicate
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Comment from Elias Noor
The writing is engaging, fast-paced, and builds on the suspense established earlier. A bit more emotional depth and environmental detail could push this to a perfect score.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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The writing is engaging, fast-paced, and builds on the suspense established earlier. A bit more emotional depth and environmental detail could push this to a perfect score.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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thanks, that is exactly the kind of info i'm looking for
Comment from papa55mike
The thrill of the chase when you're the target they want. There's more action to follow. This is a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your project! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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The thrill of the chase when you're the target they want. There's more action to follow. This is a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your project! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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thanks mike, this is my first novel
