To Marilyn
A Lune Poem11 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good opening line, followed by
a good message about not being
possible to capture pure passion.
You either have it or you don't,
or maybe you have some; it
would be hard to live up to this model.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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-Good artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good opening line, followed by
a good message about not being
possible to capture pure passion.
You either have it or you don't,
or maybe you have some; it
would be hard to live up to this model.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Thank you, I think passion can be displayed but rarely captured or learned, one must own it, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome. I think we learn through experience.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
She simply possessed that unbridled passion in spades, loved being in front of the camera and knew instinctively how to make love to it. Your 5-3-5 lune verse perfectly captures that particular essence and its illusiveness. An excellent entry. Well done, Kahput, and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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She simply possessed that unbridled passion in spades, loved being in front of the camera and knew instinctively how to make love to it. Your 5-3-5 lune verse perfectly captures that particular essence and its illusiveness. An excellent entry. Well done, Kahput, and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Debbie, I always thought she was so troubled yet seemed so free and happy, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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I think she was just a natural in front of the camera. But her private life was a bit of a mess. She was no bimbo, very bright and was ambitious for more prestigious acting work, as well as longing to have a family, none of which she achieved.
Comment from royowen
Although she was a physically beautiful woman, that just what she was, physically, I think she had real problems living up to creation thst she was, as we all do,, this is an excellent work, Kahpot, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Although she was a physically beautiful woman, that just what she was, physically, I think she had real problems living up to creation thst she was, as we all do,, this is an excellent work, Kahpot, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Roy, yes, many problems I think, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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That's right
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
She will always be remembered for her beauty and passion and for her innocent vulnerability. She felt every emotion and displayed it. I enjoyed your fine poem for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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She will always be remembered for her beauty and passion and for her innocent vulnerability. She felt every emotion and displayed it. I enjoyed your fine poem for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Kahpot,
Those three lines are short, but the message is powerful. How do you tame a passion? I guess one way is to write about it. It puts things out there for you and the reader to analyze.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Kahpot,
Those three lines are short, but the message is powerful. How do you tame a passion? I guess one way is to write about it. It puts things out there for you and the reader to analyze.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Cecilia, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You're welcome
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Lune poem and picture presentation supporting - Marilyn certain is one of the best known people in our country and beyond- can remember her way back in the fifties- a favorite calendar model- your poem is well written- can ever be caught nor tended - nice - no replica will ever match the living person-
Good Job - Alan
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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I like your Lune poem and picture presentation supporting - Marilyn certain is one of the best known people in our country and beyond- can remember her way back in the fifties- a favorite calendar model- your poem is well written- can ever be caught nor tended - nice - no replica will ever match the living person-
Good Job - Alan
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Alan, yes, as a young lad she was the dream, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an awesome lune poem with an image from an artist I see on fanartriew. I was too young to know about Marilyn Monroe but I've heard from my parents in the past. Best wishes, Alex
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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This is an awesome lune poem with an image from an artist I see on fanartriew. I was too young to know about Marilyn Monroe but I've heard from my parents in the past. Best wishes, Alex
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Alex, yes, back in the day (my day) she was in every boys mind, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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I've heard about that. I think it's good she wasn't a twig. Girls need that sense of self these days. The internet might have hurt her career as people judge so much now. Good night from the US, Alex
Comment from Lana Marie
This is a lovely Lune piece. I didn't realize Marilyn was in such great shape.
Your words are so powerful. "unbridled passion can never be caught nor tended" you're either passionate or not. I wish it was contagious sometimes people out there need a little more passion these days.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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This is a lovely Lune piece. I didn't realize Marilyn was in such great shape.
Your words are so powerful. "unbridled passion can never be caught nor tended" you're either passionate or not. I wish it was contagious sometimes people out there need a little more passion these days.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, I think I admire free spirit, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dawn Munro
*sigh*... Such a beautiful (and sadly, at least in my case because it gets me into ALL kinds of trouble...) TRUE poem.
Best of luck in the contest. I LOVED it! (And Marilyn.)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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*sigh*... Such a beautiful (and sadly, at least in my case because it gets me into ALL kinds of trouble...) TRUE poem.
Best of luck in the contest. I LOVED it! (And Marilyn.)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Sam Shaw's iconic shot is likely among the best 100 shots ever snapped, and as for Marilyn I question how passionate she truly was, since she was likely used along her star-studded way.
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Sam Shaw's iconic shot is likely among the best 100 shots ever snapped, and as for Marilyn I question how passionate she truly was, since she was likely used along her star-studded way.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Tom, I just came across this artwork and thought I would give it a go, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
