Deep in the heart of Texas
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "continue- Releasing Stress"The real Texas.
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, sir, this is like getting a history lesson, but only better. I don't remember enjoy reading and studying this stuff nearly as much back then as I do getting it from you. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Yes, sir, this is like getting a history lesson, but only better. I don't remember enjoy reading and studying this stuff nearly as much back then as I do getting it from you. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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More to come. Thanks, Ric.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I feel sorry for Paul, he would love to raise cotton. Perhaps he'll get the chance later if the family let him have a part of the ranch to grow it. We'll see. Now this Doolin, he's still a problem, and Ralph knows not to be complacent. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandy xxxx
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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I feel sorry for Paul, he would love to raise cotton. Perhaps he'll get the chance later if the family let him have a part of the ranch to grow it. We'll see. Now this Doolin, he's still a problem, and Ralph knows not to be complacent. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandy xxxx
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Thanks Sandy. OH, by the way. Congratulation on your book of the month.
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Thank you, my friend. And you are very welcome, I love your story. I sometimes take time off to rest my eyes. My sight is getting so bad. I'm waiting to have my cataracts removed. But I do catch up if I miss some, so don't think I've forgotten you!! 😂🥰🥰🥰xxx
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You will be glad to get them gone. I do.
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Yes, I can't wait. I'm using a big magnifying glass to check my work out at the moment. It takes me ages. Fortunately, I'm a touch typist so don't need to look at what I'm typing. But I still like to check it over. I'm glad you find it better now, I wish I could get it done soon. Big hugs, my friend.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your book really pulls me into the life of this ranch family. Paul's views views on the ranch's future really adds to the family's journey. I also like how you create a sense of tension with Doolin and the gang. Keeping that mystery just enough in the background to keep me very curious!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Your book really pulls me into the life of this ranch family. Paul's views views on the ranch's future really adds to the family's journey. I also like how you create a sense of tension with Doolin and the gang. Keeping that mystery just enough in the background to keep me very curious!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thanks Mich, IT DOES A TWIST OF THINGS YET TO COME.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Charles,
Another fine chapter in this ever evolving book. You are doing a great job retelling this story. I hope for all our sakes the Doolin gang is caught before they find there way to Texas. I have a feeling you haven't seen the last of them yet.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Charles,
Another fine chapter in this ever evolving book. You are doing a great job retelling this story. I hope for all our sakes the Doolin gang is caught before they find there way to Texas. I have a feeling you haven't seen the last of them yet.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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thanks, Cecilia.
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You're welcome
Comment from Elias Noor
This story is a strong foundation for a historical saga, blending family legacy with the looming threat of outlaw violence. The authentic depiction of ranch life and law enforcement grounds the narrative, while the looming conflict with the Doolin Gang adds suspense. With clearer relationships, refined sentence flow, and more direct conflict, this story has the potential to be a gripping and heartfelt tale of survival, duty, and family in post-war Texas.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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This story is a strong foundation for a historical saga, blending family legacy with the looming threat of outlaw violence. The authentic depiction of ranch life and law enforcement grounds the narrative, while the looming conflict with the Doolin Gang adds suspense. With clearer relationships, refined sentence flow, and more direct conflict, this story has the potential to be a gripping and heartfelt tale of survival, duty, and family in post-war Texas.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you. For better understanding, the manuscript can be found in my portfolio. I have been writing these sags for fifty tears, published several. Something I love doing. I write and read only clean sagas, hope you find mine the same, Sending blessings your way.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I hope the Doolin gang doesn't come this direction either, but I am worried about it. I really like this story.
ranch would stay the same.The Source of sharing the profits with all of us was our savings for retirement, if I lived to reach the mark. (space needed after the period & source)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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I hope the Doolin gang doesn't come this direction either, but I am worried about it. I really like this story.
ranch would stay the same.The Source of sharing the profits with all of us was our savings for retirement, if I lived to reach the mark. (space needed after the period & source)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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OK. Thanks, Barb.
