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Burn It All Down

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A war of a few against a syndicate

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I really enjoyed how you built tension in this chapter. The way you describe Alex's environment and his emotions pulls me in right from the start. I could really feel his anxiety as he faces danger. The twist with Grayson was great - it made me want to know more. I love how you keep things mysterious and keep me on my toes. You've got a strong voice and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep going - I'm hooked!

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
    did you like the new book cover
reply by Michael Ludwinder on 16-Jan-2025
    VERY MUCH!