Gudetama's Resolution
When the world keeps poking at you to be better.2 total reviews
Comment from Elias Noor
This short poem is evocative and rich with imagery despite its brevity. The juxtaposition of the "lazy eye" and the "cackling storm" creates a compelling contrast between stillness and chaos.
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This short poem is evocative and rich with imagery despite its brevity. The juxtaposition of the "lazy eye" and the "cackling storm" creates a compelling contrast between stillness and chaos.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed this poem! The phrase "lazy eye swims" feels almost surreal. "Cackling storm" is a perfect touch. I feel like the tension from that line contrasts nicely with the relaxed feel of "lazy eye." Your poem
leaves a lot to think about. I really appreciate how your words spark the imagination!
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I really enjoyed this poem! The phrase "lazy eye swims" feels almost surreal. "Cackling storm" is a perfect touch. I feel like the tension from that line contrasts nicely with the relaxed feel of "lazy eye." Your poem
leaves a lot to think about. I really appreciate how your words spark the imagination!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
