Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Charles,

This s a great continuation of your story. I hope for the towns sake they keep riding into Mexico. Somehow I don't think that is going to be the case. That's too easy.

Well done

Cecilia

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025

Thank you very much.

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 08-Jan-2025

You're welcome

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I know your story is fiction, but you are so knowledgeable about your characters and previous history that you make me feel like I'm getting the insides scoop all the time. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025

Thank you, Ric.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Nicely done. I really enjoyed how you brought the character of Doolin to life. I could feel the tension around the potential threat of his gang. The news from Sheriff Clark kept me on edge. I was wondering what would happen next. I especially liked the back and forth with Charlie. I'm excited to see how things unfold - keep going. This is a great read!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thank you.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I do hope our friends don't meet up with these outlaws, but am afraid they might. I do really like this story and you're doing a good job writing it.

My friend Sheriff Clark wired me with news (friend,)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Glad you like it, Barb. Taking it one step at a time.