Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi HarryT
This short poem exposes the world's biggest problem. We must all learn to love, help and accept people to have even a chance at living in peace
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and I have provided a link to it at the bottom of my profile page

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024

Thank you

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Dec-2024

You're welcome.
Joan

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

This is a great under ten poem. The message is very powerful. This world does need more people who care. I think we all walk around in our little world and don't give much thought to people around us.

Well done and good luck in the contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024

So please you got the message. Fear has become to great in our lives. Hopefully caring will, at least, help us to feel better about ourselves.
Thanks for the read and feedback.

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 28-Dec-2024

You're welcome

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello. Your compassionate theme is very powerful!! What a wonderful verse for this 10 or less contest. You did a really good job in saying a lot with few words.

Melissa

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024

Thanks for the read and encouraging feedback. Appreciated.