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A Hallowed Shadow

“No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.”

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Avery
This free verse poem has a spattering of rhyme and seems to say you have had a rough start in life but faith will give you the strength to put it behind you and live again
Keep writing and stay healthy
Hope this did well in the contest.
Have a good upcoming week.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2025

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved your note at the top of the page as this is so true. We allow others to bring us down and the trick is to not consent to it. This is an intuitive and honest write with good advice within, I enjoyed the journey here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2024

Comment from Rick Gardner
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Strong words to read and understand, Have never felt rage or suffered disillusionment at any time in my life. My best days have been and will be. We live in the now, existed in the past.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2024