Christmas Mouse
A short verse, for this season.15 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
What a lovely piece of writing. Thanks for sharing and completely appropriate for Christmas. Love the photo and the scene painted by your words is so believable.
Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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What a lovely piece of writing. Thanks for sharing and completely appropriate for Christmas. Love the photo and the scene painted by your words is so believable.
Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
A cute poetic tribute to the true Christmas story. I'm sure there were a few other observers there to witness the birth of our Christ Jesus. Well written and original.
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A cute poetic tribute to the true Christmas story. I'm sure there were a few other observers there to witness the birth of our Christ Jesus. Well written and original.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
A sweet short verse for this special season we set aside to celebrate the birth of our Savior.
Very nicely done.
Blessings and Merry Christmas.
Janet
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A sweet short verse for this special season we set aside to celebrate the birth of our Savior.
Very nicely done.
Blessings and Merry Christmas.
Janet
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a creative poem. We can watch the activities of Mary and Joseph as they prepare for the birth of the child but we are watching them through new eyes. Nicely written festive piece. Thanks for sharing.
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What a creative poem. We can watch the activities of Mary and Joseph as they prepare for the birth of the child but we are watching them through new eyes. Nicely written festive piece. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from LJbutterfly
I love the creativity of this short poem. The story it tells could very well be true. It shows the appreciation of one of the smallest animals, that he had a roll in the stable. I enjoyed the musical rhythm of your rhymes and the imagery provided. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly.
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I love the creativity of this short poem. The story it tells could very well be true. It shows the appreciation of one of the smallest animals, that he had a roll in the stable. I enjoyed the musical rhythm of your rhymes and the imagery provided. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love mice and used to keep them as pets. So I was hooked from the get-go. And what a delightful and original concept to see the nativity from a mouse perspective, the very humblest of stable creatures present and influential in this iconic birth. Your magical little poem is genuinely quite moving and a joy to read. Well done, Beejay! Take care Debbie
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I love mice and used to keep them as pets. So I was hooked from the get-go. And what a delightful and original concept to see the nativity from a mouse perspective, the very humblest of stable creatures present and influential in this iconic birth. Your magical little poem is genuinely quite moving and a joy to read. Well done, Beejay! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
This is super cute I love it. This Christmas mouse really kept thing under wraps didn't he, though he was there for thr whole thing! And even helped out where it could. I absolutely love the angle you took with this, it's clever, simple, fun and adorable. Well done!!!
Nicki
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This is super cute I love it. This Christmas mouse really kept thing under wraps didn't he, though he was there for thr whole thing! And even helped out where it could. I absolutely love the angle you took with this, it's clever, simple, fun and adorable. Well done!!!
Nicki
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from jmdg1954
Quite the interesting take on a Christmas poem. I thoroughly enjoyed this story of the excited little mouse on the greatest day in history.
Easily read and presented.
Thank you.
John
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Quite the interesting take on a Christmas poem. I thoroughly enjoyed this story of the excited little mouse on the greatest day in history.
Easily read and presented.
Thank you.
John
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from Laurie Holding
Just freaking adorable. Thank you for posting this sweet, short, beauty of a poem. You should do a whole series and make a chapbook out of it. Well done, and I wish you Merry Christmas.
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Just freaking adorable. Thank you for posting this sweet, short, beauty of a poem. You should do a whole series and make a chapbook out of it. Well done, and I wish you Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
A very nice poem. It was clever to use a mouse at that time. Picture goes well with the mouse. Nice description of the birth of N Jesus as the mouse saw it.
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A very nice poem. It was clever to use a mouse at that time. Picture goes well with the mouse. Nice description of the birth of N Jesus as the mouse saw it.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024