Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a wonderfully and dare I say romantic haiku for the contest here -- well done! ;) Thank you so much for sharing your pen and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024

Thank you for your read and review.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I enjoyed this piece. There's a lovely feel to it and nice imagery employed.

I would probably think about the presentation a little as the white text bleeds / blends a bit into the pink background.

All syllables present and correct, which is always nice!

best of luck to you
GMG

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024

Thanks for the feedback will look at the presentation.

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

This is just so sweet, I really love it! You made the rain sound so magically in your choice of words, it reads beautifully, well done and good luck with the contest
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024

Thank you for your read and feedback. Apprecated.