Begin Again?
Is forgiveness enough?3 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
You've written an excellent story of drama within a family.
Your narrative is crisp and your characterization is excellent.
Good luck with this one.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Author,
You've written an excellent story of drama within a family.
Your narrative is crisp and your characterization is excellent.
Good luck with this one.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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So kind, Cindy. Thanks.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great story. I guess her husband had a fling with the teacher and she found out. I learned a couple new words today, still learning,
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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This is a great story. I guess her husband had a fling with the teacher and she found out. I learned a couple new words today, still learning,
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia.
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. I love the little details, like Tom giggling and kissing you - a beautiful touch that softened the scene and made it feel so real. I also loved how Bill's calming influence. I could feel the emotions which made the ending even more enjoyable.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I thought this was well written. I love the little details, like Tom giggling and kissing you - a beautiful touch that softened the scene and made it feel so real. I also loved how Bill's calming influence. I could feel the emotions which made the ending even more enjoyable.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Grand, Michael. Thank you.