The Election Aftermath
America faces the future with The Donald5 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. Nice rhyming with the poem. It was very descriptive and well written. I am fearful for the future. I know God is in charge. He will do what is in his plan.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Nice rhyming with the poem. It was very descriptive and well written. I am fearful for the future. I know God is in charge. He will do what is in his plan.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Hi Brenda
Thank you for your lovely engaging review.
What will be, will be
Take care and stay safe
Comment from Amanda Geering
I absolutely love Trump and find it funny how many people are angry about his wealth and decisions. He wants to make the world better and yes he has some firm and old fashioned beliefs but he is right on track! Keeping America great again can mean whatever you like but we need to stop being so accepting of the ways humans are harming themselves and wrecking the world. This political poem could be bang on when it states he could fix the issues in America, as the rules state America needs to put its mask on first before it helps others or the plane is going down and your all gonna die.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I absolutely love Trump and find it funny how many people are angry about his wealth and decisions. He wants to make the world better and yes he has some firm and old fashioned beliefs but he is right on track! Keeping America great again can mean whatever you like but we need to stop being so accepting of the ways humans are harming themselves and wrecking the world. This political poem could be bang on when it states he could fix the issues in America, as the rules state America needs to put its mask on first before it helps others or the plane is going down and your all gonna die.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your 6 stars
Bless you and stay safe
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a lively take on the political scene! I love how you capture the larger than life personalities in your writing. I love the way you mix in humor with serious issues - like trade wars and climate change. It's a fun read that gets the point across with flair!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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What a lively take on the political scene! I love how you capture the larger than life personalities in your writing. I love the way you mix in humor with serious issues - like trade wars and climate change. It's a fun read that gets the point across with flair!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your lovely review. I find American politics very engaging and entertaining.
Take care and stay safe
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I sincerely hope the changes that are to come will help America prosper and rise out of the inflation that is affecting the entire world. Tightening the borders can only be a good thing and as for climate change, there are more pressing problems like preventing a world war. Let us hope that America makes peace with other countries, especially those capable of destroying the world. A fine pragmatic poem for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I sincerely hope the changes that are to come will help America prosper and rise out of the inflation that is affecting the entire world. Tightening the borders can only be a good thing and as for climate change, there are more pressing problems like preventing a world war. Let us hope that America makes peace with other countries, especially those capable of destroying the world. A fine pragmatic poem for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your encouraging review Dolly.
Take care and stay safe.
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Comment from lancellot
Hmm, interesting. Good luck in the contest.
notes:
"It is either me"says Kamala "or that rusty looking fellow
-"It is either me," says Kamala "or that rusty looking fellow
Deals will be brokered, some treaties born
A new order will soon be born
- recommend a better end rhyme here than repeating the word.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Hmm, interesting. Good luck in the contest.
notes:
"It is either me"says Kamala "or that rusty looking fellow
-"It is either me," says Kamala "or that rusty looking fellow
Deals will be brokered, some treaties born
A new order will soon be born
- recommend a better end rhyme here than repeating the word.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Hi Lancelot
Many thanks for your feedback
The born/born rhyme was a genuine oversight and I missed this each time I checked. I have now revised. You have saved me some embarrassment.
Best wishes