Comment from zanya

Excellent

Some beautiful and optimistic wishes expressed here with which many of us can agree and hope they might come to pass - eventually perhaps? The 2nd last couplet is especially hopeful.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2024

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

This is a great poem. I like the way it rhymes and flows to completion to the end. Aah, we all want our dreams to come true and if we pray hard enough they might.

Great job and good luck in your contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This ten-line poem, Wishful Dreams, has the proper formatting and makes me hope, as I lay down to sleep, that your dreams all come true as you wish. .

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024

Bill,

Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your comments.

All the best,

BB50

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a beautiful wish you've shared here! Each line flows so gently. I love the repetition of "I wish". It creates a soothing rhythm that pulls me in. I especially love how you've tied nature into these wishes. There's a sense of longing for peace and healing that touches me. Your writing has such a calming feeling!

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024

Michael,

Thank you for your review. I'm pleased you enjoyed this hopeful poem.

All the best,

BB50