About Time
Contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from SimianSavant
Haha this was a good one. Love your dinosaur pic, and the Iwo Jima hellscape. A couple little edits:
Stanza two: in four more YEARS
Stanza eight: and takes those BIDENS down (no possessive apostrophe)
Thanks for the laugh and hope to see more of your hilarious writing soon?
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Haha this was a good one. Love your dinosaur pic, and the Iwo Jima hellscape. A couple little edits:
Stanza two: in four more YEARS
Stanza eight: and takes those BIDENS down (no possessive apostrophe)
Thanks for the laugh and hope to see more of your hilarious writing soon?
🦍
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from pome lover
I love this. You did a great job on the whole thing, message, rhyme, meter,
feelings! And, I hope, also, that he does something about the Bidens' corruption, but he may be too busy with trying to heal this country and its people. I read somewhere, that he might start at new position for "efficiency" and appoint Musk for that. We'll see.
Katharine
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I love this. You did a great job on the whole thing, message, rhyme, meter,
feelings! And, I hope, also, that he does something about the Bidens' corruption, but he may be too busy with trying to heal this country and its people. I read somewhere, that he might start at new position for "efficiency" and appoint Musk for that. We'll see.
Katharine
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the great review, Katharine. Yes, I'm sure he'll be a busy boy once he's in there. I'm sure whatever happens it'll be for the better. I really appreciate the gracious stars, K. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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I did, indeed. It was very good.
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, I just love you! The art is altered from the other contestants, and it looks like you added your personal touch, which is great. Trump is like a mother raptor, protecting her egg. Biden, Harris and Walz have fed us to every evil creature on the planet. A virtual six and my vote when the contest opens.
All my best,
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Oh, I just love you! The art is altered from the other contestants, and it looks like you added your personal touch, which is great. Trump is like a mother raptor, protecting her egg. Biden, Harris and Walz have fed us to every evil creature on the planet. A virtual six and my vote when the contest opens.
All my best,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for the great review and the six offer, Sally. Yes, the contest has that picture on all the entries and I thought it was a great concept, Trump on a T-Rex, so I just had to create my own version of it. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and support. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful day and thank you again.
Comment from Gayla putnam
I disagree with everything you have written, but I can't rate your poem down because it's riveting, funny, and, in your mind, the truth. I would vote for it in a contest because it's incredibly well-written. You have done an excellent job if you can make a Harris voter laugh. Good luck in the contest. gayla
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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I disagree with everything you have written, but I can't rate your poem down because it's riveting, funny, and, in your mind, the truth. I would vote for it in a contest because it's incredibly well-written. You have done an excellent job if you can make a Harris voter laugh. Good luck in the contest. gayla
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Lol. That's all I was really going for, to give some folks a chuckle. Thank you for the fantastic review, Gayla. That's what it was written for, a member sponsored contest. That's why I went this route with it. Haha. I really appreciate the stars, G. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
It's not showing the author but I think this is the third political poem I read from you. This is by far my favorite. Again, full of passion and intensity. The energy is undeniable! It's clear that you have strong feelings about Trump. That comes through so easily. The rhyme is excellent! This flows well. Keep going strong with your voice!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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It's not showing the author but I think this is the third political poem I read from you. This is by far my favorite. Again, full of passion and intensity. The energy is undeniable! It's clear that you have strong feelings about Trump. That comes through so easily. The rhyme is excellent! This flows well. Keep going strong with your voice!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Michael. There's a few folks putting their two cents in. I think I've added a couple in the last few days. I don't keep track. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.