A Fisherman's Life
A day in the life of a fisherman6 total reviews
Comment from Jacob1395
I really loved this piece and especially how you described the lone fisherman on the seas sailing towards the comfort of home as the day nears it end. An excellent piece, Pam, I really enjoyed reading it.
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I really loved this piece and especially how you described the lone fisherman on the seas sailing towards the comfort of home as the day nears it end. An excellent piece, Pam, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Right off the bat we have two lines that set the stage for the fisherman's day and your lovely tribute poem.
"He wraps all his fish in yesterday's news." - Love it!
Just as you did for the farmer, you've written a story of a man's life, passion, and family with your rhyming poem. And you've added the art work, as well. You're a creative one, Pam!
Thanks for sharing.
xo
Pam
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Right off the bat we have two lines that set the stage for the fisherman's day and your lovely tribute poem.
"He wraps all his fish in yesterday's news." - Love it!
Just as you did for the farmer, you've written a story of a man's life, passion, and family with your rhyming poem. And you've added the art work, as well. You're a creative one, Pam!
Thanks for sharing.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Aussie
I liked your artwork to compliment your story/poem. Like you, I grew up with a fishing line and my dad taught me how to fish. The whole family were mad keen fisherfolk. And yes, we can't take the female crabs and all the crabs must be measured. Once I had a fish on, hauling it in, it was heavy. Attached to the fish was a blue swimmer crab! K xx
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I liked your artwork to compliment your story/poem. Like you, I grew up with a fishing line and my dad taught me how to fish. The whole family were mad keen fisherfolk. And yes, we can't take the female crabs and all the crabs must be measured. Once I had a fish on, hauling it in, it was heavy. Attached to the fish was a blue swimmer crab! K xx
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from EeanBlack
"Fatigue and desire will cancel, you know", is the most beautiful line I've heard here. One's imagination can take him places, but, your imagination has me wanting to live there forever. I've been planning to go to the US Virgin Islands for a year now. Maybe next summer. We all need to slow down and just do it.
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"Fatigue and desire will cancel, you know", is the most beautiful line I've heard here. One's imagination can take him places, but, your imagination has me wanting to live there forever. I've been planning to go to the US Virgin Islands for a year now. Maybe next summer. We all need to slow down and just do it.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from bob cullen
This is so good and detailed in fact. This reader felt informed almost to the point of being a fisherman himself. The terms and language brought reality to the tale. Most enjoyable.
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This is so good and detailed in fact. This reader felt informed almost to the point of being a fisherman himself. The terms and language brought reality to the tale. Most enjoyable.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
I enjoyed this narrative poem of your successful fishing expedition. the flowed throughout the poem was calm and peaceful. Thanks for sharing your beautiful story. Well done, dear Pam.
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I enjoyed this narrative poem of your successful fishing expedition. the flowed throughout the poem was calm and peaceful. Thanks for sharing your beautiful story. Well done, dear Pam.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024