Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Troll"for various occasions
3 total reviews
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
A wickedly clever response to the prompt that made me laugh (a little too loud). It was poetically pleasing to read while remaining unapologetically crass- which I thoroughly enjoyed.
Well done, my friend.
Xo Jess
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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A wickedly clever response to the prompt that made me laugh (a little too loud). It was poetically pleasing to read while remaining unapologetically crass- which I thoroughly enjoyed.
Well done, my friend.
Xo Jess
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much Jess. While fun to write, somehow the sharpest writing often earns the fewest votes, and it's great to get some rare positive feedback on it. 🦍
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You certainly obeyed the rules of the sonnet here with perfect metre and rhymes and I enjoyed your witty words to ruffle a few feathers here, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
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You certainly obeyed the rules of the sonnet here with perfect metre and rhymes and I enjoyed your witty words to ruffle a few feathers here, a fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
Comment from lancellot
Interesting sonnet. I too like to drop into these squeaky-clean contests and catch the old ladies off guard. I like your sense of humor and thinking outside the box. I only wish there were more it. I get so tired of cute pets and cuter nature posts, and adults characters speaking and behaving like pre-teen religious virgins.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Interesting sonnet. I too like to drop into these squeaky-clean contests and catch the old ladies off guard. I like your sense of humor and thinking outside the box. I only wish there were more it. I get so tired of cute pets and cuter nature posts, and adults characters speaking and behaving like pre-teen religious virgins.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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There might be more of it if these sorts of entries could win a single vote other than my own : ) Thanks for the vote of confidence though -- I'd rather entertain like-minded writers and push the limits over winning votes.
