Don't Give Up
Moving forward5 total reviews
Comment from Kahlani
A short poem with a big message. This would make a wonderful poster for mental health advertising. Well done and all the best in the contest, mbagby23.
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A short poem with a big message. This would make a wonderful poster for mental health advertising. Well done and all the best in the contest, mbagby23.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Don't Give Up, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that there are some moments where the thought of stopping and leaving have to chance against pursuit.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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This 2-4-2, Don't Give Up, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that there are some moments where the thought of stopping and leaving have to chance against pursuit.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Ever so true and thanks for the review
Comment from Begin Again
When things get tough and it seems to difficult to continue forward, it's so easy for us to shrug our shoulders and give in, but how do we know that if we had given it just another minute or two, things would have turned out right.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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When things get tough and it seems to difficult to continue forward, it's so easy for us to shrug our shoulders and give in, but how do we know that if we had given it just another minute or two, things would have turned out right.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Yes, you are so right about that and thanks for your support and review
Comment from papa55mike
There are many days when it is difficult, but still, we have to push on toward our destiny. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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There are many days when it is difficult, but still, we have to push on toward our destiny. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Ever so ture, not every day is golden. Thank for you review
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Thanks for your kind review
Comment from patcelaw
This is a good 2-4-2 for him for the contest that I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. You also have a wonderful weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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This is a good 2-4-2 for him for the contest that I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. You also have a wonderful weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thanks for your review. You also too have a wonderful weekend