Comment from
davisr (Rhonda)
A great read, Terry. It was engaging and well written. I loved the insight you gave into both your main characters. It was fun to have you share a world most of us usually only know from the other side of the bed.
Take care, and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
So glad you liked it, Rhonda. Thank you.
Comment from
mermaids
I like the term "brainbox." I had never heard of it before, it is a clever word.
I am a nurse, so I enjoyed your story and also liked the mention of ornithology, I bird watch as well occasionally. Excellent writing that has a smooth flow to it and holds the reader's interest. This is a good entry for the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024