Turn Right at the Moon - Part 3
1,150 words. Let's meet Chloe.4 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I guess crooks and dangerous people exist and make their home on the moon, and anywhere else in this universe that we may inhabit. Thank you Mike for your brilliant storytelling ability with the pen, I always read with great relish your great stories, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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I guess crooks and dangerous people exist and make their home on the moon, and anywhere else in this universe that we may inhabit. Thank you Mike for your brilliant storytelling ability with the pen, I always read with great relish your great stories, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
Comment from Gayla putnam
I love all your characters and their descriptions. It's like reading a Jack Ryan novel. Everyone is calm and collected, but it's very believable. Some of the lines are great. "The driver melted into his seat." You build some nice dramatic tension when the bad guys exit the car and enter the store. Can't wait for the next chapter. gayla
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I love all your characters and their descriptions. It's like reading a Jack Ryan novel. Everyone is calm and collected, but it's very believable. Some of the lines are great. "The driver melted into his seat." You build some nice dramatic tension when the bad guys exit the car and enter the store. Can't wait for the next chapter. gayla
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Mike,
A great story taking bits of our life and society and projecting it onto a science fiction background. People are people, that is the gist of your story. Beyond that, it's a great tale about a woman and how she handles security and herself.
Great job,
Rhonda
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Hi Mike,
A great story taking bits of our life and society and projecting it onto a science fiction background. People are people, that is the gist of your story. Beyond that, it's a great tale about a woman and how she handles security and herself.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
Comment from estory
It pays to have good friends. The trooper seems to show up at just the right moment. Part sci fi, part western pulp fiction, part dark comedy, this story illustrates how people don't really change much and how the past and the future and technology mean little against human nature. estory
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It pays to have good friends. The trooper seems to show up at just the right moment. Part sci fi, part western pulp fiction, part dark comedy, this story illustrates how people don't really change much and how the past and the future and technology mean little against human nature. estory
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024