Spirited Justice
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Spirited Justice Chap 30"Mystery, crime and ghostly high jinks
17 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi, Carol, I loved that scene between Donatelli and Jenna. I do hope much more will come of it. Well see, and I can't wait to catch up with more of your writing. I'm behind as per usual. Hugs, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Hi, Carol, I loved that scene between Donatelli and Jenna. I do hope much more will come of it. Well see, and I can't wait to catch up with more of your writing. I'm behind as per usual. Hugs, Ulla xx
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Not to worry, Ulla. I am behind on everything too! I so appreciate when you can read and review and especially the stars...You are more than kind. Thanks for the blessings.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Harry Craft
I don't think we ever get through all the paperwork." I liked this line the best because I think it is something I say everyday at work lol! Nice chapter again Carol! Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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I don't think we ever get through all the paperwork." I liked this line the best because I think it is something I say everyday at work lol! Nice chapter again Carol! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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No, Harry, regardless of how hard we work, there always seems there is more to do. I am retired and there still is work to do. I appreciate you as always.
Smiles, Carol
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Well, that is true. I am still working and there is always work to do lol!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It's about time Jenna and Donatelli got together for more than a discussion about murder. They are attracted to each other, so it makes sense to explore a deeper relationship. Jenna has not suspicion about Patti, although the same could not be said for Donatelli.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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It's about time Jenna and Donatelli got together for more than a discussion about murder. They are attracted to each other, so it makes sense to explore a deeper relationship. Jenna has not suspicion about Patti, although the same could not be said for Donatelli.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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I thought so too! I believe it will be a major focus in book 3...not saying it will be an easy ride...how could it be with Donatelli and (me writing it of course) lol. Appreciate the review and your thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
I really laughed at the scene with Eleanor and Jenna, particularly when Eleanor was putting pressure on Jenna to ask Matthew out, I could just imagine how Jenna must've been feeling. Another excellent, entertaining read, Carol. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I really laughed at the scene with Eleanor and Jenna, particularly when Eleanor was putting pressure on Jenna to ask Matthew out, I could just imagine how Jenna must've been feeling. Another excellent, entertaining read, Carol. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Don't just love Eleanor? When I first started writing this series...I almost stopped because I didn't think I could write a ghost story. But once I decided it was fiction and I could write it as I saw it...like Eleanor and her humor... I've fallen in love.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I figured you would put some romance into this story. It sounds like Jenna likes this guy. Now I'm wondering what Patti is up too. Having a invisible ghost around isn't easy for someone trying to get away with something.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I figured you would put some romance into this story. It sounds like Jenna likes this guy. Now I'm wondering what Patti is up too. Having a invisible ghost around isn't easy for someone trying to get away with something.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Patti is looking for trouble and yes, I believe Donatelli might have found him a woman...a budding romance any how. He'll carry it over into the next book...which I can't wait to get rolling.
Thabks as always, Beth. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
I enjoyed this chapter very much. It's good to see Donatelli's other side and the prospective romance with Jenna. Patti B is someone to watch though - she's not as innocent as she tries to make out, even if she's not guilty of murder exactly. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed this chapter very much. It's good to see Donatelli's other side and the prospective romance with Jenna. Patti B is someone to watch though - she's not as innocent as she tries to make out, even if she's not guilty of murder exactly. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I think we are about to find the softer side of Donatelli.. .though in the next book he still will have a rocky road ahead of him. Appreciate the review as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
No matter what the story, you always manage to throw a little romance in to keep us readers wishing and hoping for a little something sweet. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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No matter what the story, you always manage to throw a little romance in to keep us readers wishing and hoping for a little something sweet. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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There he is...How are you?
Yes, a little romance never hurt anyone...and besides it's a lead in toward the next series of this story...
Smiles and hugs, CArol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Throughout this novel and your previous two, you excel in character development. No two characters are alike. Even though they are both ghosts, Eleanor and Danni are so different in more ways than age and experience. Garth, Matthew, and even Angelo have totally different personalities. They are so developed, the reader can almost guess how each will respond to new information about the case.
Now that Jenna and Matthew have had dinner together, I already know they will cautiously advance their relationship. I love reading about a budding romance that even surprises the participants.
Now, let's see what Patti is up to, and how she gets out of the mess she is in.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Throughout this novel and your previous two, you excel in character development. No two characters are alike. Even though they are both ghosts, Eleanor and Danni are so different in more ways than age and experience. Garth, Matthew, and even Angelo have totally different personalities. They are so developed, the reader can almost guess how each will respond to new information about the case.
Now that Jenna and Matthew have had dinner together, I already know they will cautiously advance their relationship. I love reading about a budding romance that even surprises the participants.
Now, let's see what Patti is up to, and how she gets out of the mess she is in.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Wow! You just want to make my day again, don't you? I can't believe you have a six on a Saturday!!! I am thrilled. And thank you for the observations about my characters. That's very awesome of you. Now Patti...she's working her way into big trouble I think...
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
It's interesting as to whether you mention ages, I can't recall you saying those particular things, but age makes a difference when romantic liaisons are happening, Like Jenna and Donatello, I never really knew how old Garth or his offsides are, there could be huge gaps, but Jenna likes Donatello, beautifully Written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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It's interesting as to whether you mention ages, I can't recall you saying those particular things, but age makes a difference when romantic liaisons are happening, Like Jenna and Donatello, I never really knew how old Garth or his offsides are, there could be huge gaps, but Jenna likes Donatello, beautifully Written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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In my mind, I have the three as being about the same age...maybe in their early 40's...since Jenna is Eleanor's daughter and she had her in her very early twenties.... I think that would sound about right...What do you think?
I hope Donatelli can lose that chip on his shoulder and become the nice guy he use to be...especially for Jenna's sake... In series three... they both are going to need the right people around them. Thanks again, Roy.
Smiles, Carol
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An interesting perspective, too old to have children probably.
Comment from Teri7
Carol, This is a great chapter. I am sorry I don't have any sixes yet. You used great dialogue and very good descriptive words. It kept my interest from start to finish. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Carol, This is a great chapter. I am sorry I don't have any sixes yet. You used great dialogue and very good descriptive words. It kept my interest from start to finish. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thanks Teri...I appreciate the fact that you continue to read and enjoy my story. Thank you so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You are so welcome my friend. I try to read your work as much as I can. Some days my eyes don't want to act right, but I am thankful when I can read well. love and blessings, teri