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She Found Another

The pain of rejection in love is one of nine stories told

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Comment from jessizero
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This was a great poem on the pain of rejection. You got the syllable count right for the contest, and you expressed yourself well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for the compliment and I really appreciate your kind remarks. It does mean a lot to me going forward. Regards from Gerard
Comment from Colorado Owl
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I can relate to this poem and the world it describes. Sometimes it's hard to see any light. The gloom can be external or from within, but we just have to keep moving forward.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    I know many people that have lived this and I am one of them. Write about what you know and I think this came quickly from a long ago memory. regards from Gerard