Butterfly Catching
Intrinsic Worth3 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
Liked this a lot. Yes, perfection is over rated. I like the way you have used the butterfly throughout your story. It brings back memories of my childhood when I also caught butterflies. All went onto freedom.
You did fit a lot into your wordage, and your message that it is ok to fail is one that should be repeated more often.
Well done and thanks for sharing.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Liked this a lot. Yes, perfection is over rated. I like the way you have used the butterfly throughout your story. It brings back memories of my childhood when I also caught butterflies. All went onto freedom.
You did fit a lot into your wordage, and your message that it is ok to fail is one that should be repeated more often.
Well done and thanks for sharing.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words!
Comment from ABC123XYZ
I like the message of your piece. It is encouraging and so needed in the world today, for all ages! I like that you start off with a personal story to connect to the reader and give some context to your message. It does feel like a lot of the sentences are short and coming rapidly and more like your thoughts to speech rather than a written piece. It would benefit from a little polishing, especially for the contest. I do wish you the best in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I like the message of your piece. It is encouraging and so needed in the world today, for all ages! I like that you start off with a personal story to connect to the reader and give some context to your message. It does feel like a lot of the sentences are short and coming rapidly and more like your thoughts to speech rather than a written piece. It would benefit from a little polishing, especially for the contest. I do wish you the best in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I appreciate your feedback.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Kristen, I really enjoyed your post about self-worth. You started with a piece on butterflies, which I loved. I like butterflies. Their beauty and grace are astounding. And, despite their fragility, they are most resilient.
And, like you said, they live to be free.
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Hi Kristen, I really enjoyed your post about self-worth. You started with a piece on butterflies, which I loved. I like butterflies. Their beauty and grace are astounding. And, despite their fragility, they are most resilient.
And, like you said, they live to be free.
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review!
Kristen
