Thanksgiving Advice
This is a light verse poem.3 total reviews
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is such a cute poem. I'm a vegetarian, so I absolutely love the idea of someone driving around, warning turkeys to protect their giblets, lol. Well done.
Cheers,
Erika
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This is such a cute poem. I'm a vegetarian, so I absolutely love the idea of someone driving around, warning turkeys to protect their giblets, lol. Well done.
Cheers,
Erika
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much, Erika. I write some serious poems,
but I love to write some humor too. All the best to you!
Comment from Celyn
The rhyming is good in this poem and the story idea is fun but I think that the rhythm is a bit askew most of the way through as it varies from 11 beats plus to just 5 in one of the lines. I think that having a set rhythm like running maybe might have made the poem more effective.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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The rhyming is good in this poem and the story idea is fun but I think that the rhythm is a bit askew most of the way through as it varies from 11 beats plus to just 5 in one of the lines. I think that having a set rhythm like running maybe might have made the poem more effective.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Celyn. I appreciate your opinion.
Thanks for the 4 stars. Have
a wondrous weekend
Comment from Theodore McDowell
This one made me chuckle, especially the reference to Nascar. Well done humor. Good to read to a family during the holidays! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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This one made me chuckle, especially the reference to Nascar. Well done humor. Good to read to a family during the holidays! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much,
Theodore. Happy Weekend!