A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
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Comment from billscott
Exceptional piece! Loved the artwork! Really loved the accompanying sound effects. So cool! You caught the authentic feel of being on a ghost ship...how did you do it?
Shivers me timbers on me peg leg, aaarghh!
No one pillages me boat on these here waters!
(had to chime in...lol)
Dean, your presentation is always top notch!
I really loved this piece and every single word in it.
I can easily see this featured in a museum/historical showcase somewhere...with children and adults alike, huddled and swaying along as one reads it out loud.
Unbelievably cool!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Exceptional piece! Loved the artwork! Really loved the accompanying sound effects. So cool! You caught the authentic feel of being on a ghost ship...how did you do it?
Shivers me timbers on me peg leg, aaarghh!
No one pillages me boat on these here waters!
(had to chime in...lol)
Dean, your presentation is always top notch!
I really loved this piece and every single word in it.
I can easily see this featured in a museum/historical showcase somewhere...with children and adults alike, huddled and swaying along as one reads it out loud.
Unbelievably cool!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much for the awesome review and six star rating, Bill. I am very happy that you enjoyed the poem, and I appreciate your support very much!~~Dean
Comment from Jay Squires
Dude died!
The Ghost Ship could be a metaphor for all the ugliness, terror, heartaches, of the Earth's realm.
When he dies he takes one last look back (forgetting Saul's wife I reckon) to see "who's at the helm".
He enters the open door that dawn shows him and is reborn, nevermore to be at the helm of the ghost ship.
And, if I listen to creaking lumber one more minute I'll go crazy!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Dude died!
The Ghost Ship could be a metaphor for all the ugliness, terror, heartaches, of the Earth's realm.
When he dies he takes one last look back (forgetting Saul's wife I reckon) to see "who's at the helm".
He enters the open door that dawn shows him and is reborn, nevermore to be at the helm of the ghost ship.
And, if I listen to creaking lumber one more minute I'll go crazy!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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Ha, thanks for the kind review, Jay. I do appreciate it! :}
Comment from skye
Excellent. I love the words you use to portray death and the sorrow at leaving the world. You captured it in exquisite detail.
Thanks for fixing the words so I could read the beautiful poem.
Your words look like they are terrific, but they are too small for me to read and are not sharp and clear upon the beautiful art choice.
I am sorry.... I wish I could interpret your poem and not just complain.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Excellent. I love the words you use to portray death and the sorrow at leaving the world. You captured it in exquisite detail.
Thanks for fixing the words so I could read the beautiful poem.
Your words look like they are terrific, but they are too small for me to read and are not sharp and clear upon the beautiful art choice.
I am sorry.... I wish I could interpret your poem and not just complain.
Well done.
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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No problem, skye, and I will try to fix that problem. Thank you for the fine feedback.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey Dean,
This formatting is absolutely awesome! Love the poem as well. This is a really a neat presentation.
I might suggest a size larger font because I had to squint a little. Oh, no, it isn't that I'm getting older, just better! LOL ('-')
Great job!
Cheers & Blessings,
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
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Hey Dean,
This formatting is absolutely awesome! Love the poem as well. This is a really a neat presentation.
I might suggest a size larger font because I had to squint a little. Oh, no, it isn't that I'm getting older, just better! LOL ('-')
Great job!
Cheers & Blessings,
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2014