Renewal
Free Verse; As the New Year dawns. . .116 total reviews
Comment from R.W.L
I like the way the emotions change in this poem. It is clear that you start objectively, then start an old way of thinking based on the past, then make a conscious effort to feel hopeful.
The rhythm of the poem works well.
The pictures adds to the appeal.
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I like the way the emotions change in this poem. It is clear that you start objectively, then start an old way of thinking based on the past, then make a conscious effort to feel hopeful.
The rhythm of the poem works well.
The pictures adds to the appeal.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2008
Comment from Doreen Dulally
Wow this is packed with good stuff [words]
I liked your poem
Only a fool would stay
Manacled to the past
and I'm the biggest fool of all
thank you for sharing this one
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Wow this is packed with good stuff [words]
I liked your poem
Only a fool would stay
Manacled to the past
and I'm the biggest fool of all
thank you for sharing this one
Comment Written 08-Jan-2008
Comment from Vladilynn
wow!! i loved this one~
so much hopes that not been said..but wishes that been declared..
more powers to your works
thank you for sharing
Lynn
happy new year too!!
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wow!! i loved this one~
so much hopes that not been said..but wishes that been declared..
more powers to your works
thank you for sharing
Lynn
happy new year too!!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2008
Comment from JustJenny12345
This is a very uplifting and thoughtful poem. I like the idea of acknowledging the past's lessons but not letting them drag us there and keep us there. A new year, in fact a new day, a new minute is all there for the taking, all the time and not just annually. Great poem and definitely inspirational.
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This is a very uplifting and thoughtful poem. I like the idea of acknowledging the past's lessons but not letting them drag us there and keep us there. A new year, in fact a new day, a new minute is all there for the taking, all the time and not just annually. Great poem and definitely inspirational.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2008
Comment from justmade
Great job Diane.
Putting God into in the end made very lovely for me.
Powerful thoughts I love the expression.
Massive job.
Regards,
Justmade.
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Great job Diane.
Putting God into in the end made very lovely for me.
Powerful thoughts I love the expression.
Massive job.
Regards,
Justmade.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2008
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Diane, this is, as always, gorgeous. Time after time you manage to amaze me with your word choices, and the way you weave those words within your verse showcases your intellect and natural talent. Thank you for sharing this with me and happy new year!
Penny
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Diane, this is, as always, gorgeous. Time after time you manage to amaze me with your word choices, and the way you weave those words within your verse showcases your intellect and natural talent. Thank you for sharing this with me and happy new year!
Penny
Comment Written 08-Jan-2008
Comment from Rizalbob
Dear Mrs KT,
That is a beautifully written poem. The words and verses are beautiful and it is a pleasure to read.
Yes indeed, we must not repeat the same mistakes we have committed.
Well done
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Dear Mrs KT,
That is a beautifully written poem. The words and verses are beautiful and it is a pleasure to read.
Yes indeed, we must not repeat the same mistakes we have committed.
Well done
Comment Written 08-Jan-2008
Comment from Phill-Phonics
I thought that the structure was brilliant. It kept me glued. The imagery and the manner in which you presented this poem was excellent. The new year is all about encompassing change. Well done.-Phill-Phonics
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I thought that the structure was brilliant. It kept me glued. The imagery and the manner in which you presented this poem was excellent. The new year is all about encompassing change. Well done.-Phill-Phonics
Comment Written 08-Jan-2008
Comment from conniet
I thought your poetry was very good! You brought it to life with your words! Keep up the great work! Hope you have the best New Year ever! Connie
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I thought your poetry was very good! You brought it to life with your words! Keep up the great work! Hope you have the best New Year ever! Connie
Comment Written 08-Jan-2008
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
What a lovely lyrical quality this has to it. Parts of it remind me of a good sermon. *chuckles* So nice to see a flowing free form verse from you, Diane. Your work is truly excellent. Thank you for sharing it! Hugs, Sara
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What a lovely lyrical quality this has to it. Parts of it remind me of a good sermon. *chuckles* So nice to see a flowing free form verse from you, Diane. Your work is truly excellent. Thank you for sharing it! Hugs, Sara
Comment Written 08-Jan-2008