Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

I've heard the excuse of 'getting in with the wrong crowd' for bad behaviour, but this is original in 'getting in with the wrong TV'. :-)

I'm not generally one for censoring for adults, but I think it's sometimes necessary for kids.

Serious point put over in a fun way.

Cheers, Ted



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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014

Thank you very much.

Comment from MIKECON

Excellent

I think you said it all. In my opinion kids today are more interested in game consoles than TV.Having said that I get your drift regarding the piece.Well written with a good hidden agenda.Best of luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014

Thank you very much.