Comment from GE Parson

Excellent

Hey Mr. Dean,
I kept thinking, as I read your story, you were profiling The Evil of Evil Ones, who had been (walking about seeking whom my devour)

I'm elder enough to remember about JTR but had not thought about him for a long time.

Anyway you did a super job of describing him.

Go with God and you can't go wrong Jerry

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014

Thank you very much, Jerry. The is evil, and then, there is diabolically evil. I'd put Jack and his escapades in that last category, for sure!

I really appreciate the comments, my friend!

Comment from comanalbert

Excellent

Great insight about this famous character and good imagery in your writing.Is all the book about serial killers? Guess I have to read to find out

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014

Thanks, comanalbert, I appreciate your kind comments.

No, the book deals with all types of topics, both fantasy and realities, alike...

Thanks again for reading!

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem is well rhymed and metered. It flows as quickly as the blood for the body of Jack to the vampiress.

The story is well thought out and shows emotions of anger, hatred of self and sometimes of deed. He seems to enjoy what He's doing when he's doing it but blames what he does on a devil that pulls his strings. In the beginning he seems to have a conscious. In the end he doesn't and gets his just desserts as he become dessert for his last victim.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014

Thanks very much for reading, dragonpoet, I appreciate the kind review. And, I will...keep writing, that is.

Thanks so much, again!

reply by dragonpoet on 23-Feb-2014

You are so very welcome, Dean.

Joan

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

OMG, Dean, you are out to scare the pants
off me - and although I shouldn't read it,
I'm drawn in and followed it to the END!!

The music alone is scary enough - and I
have to admit, the poem's so skillfully
done -- yuk!!

Margaret

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014

Hah ha, well, I do try.

Thanks so much for reviewing this one for me, Margaret, as well as for the wonderful comments!

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is another dark and thrilling prime of writing from the author in this post. Jack the Ripper struck fear into London and there have been several imitators such as the Yorkshire Ripper, Peter Sutcliffe.

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014

Thank you Tomes, I appreciate your thoughts on this one.

After doing a little research, I found out some interesting facts about his last known victim. Some claim that Jack, the Yorkshire Ripper, and others, are one in the same, that ol' Jack is immortal. That is what inspired this writing.

reply by Tomes Johnston on 23-Feb-2014

That sounds like a great story to me.