Games we played
We didn't have Ipads and Iphones, X-boxes, but we had fun!54 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This beautifully nostalgic, delightful poem really resonates with me. How well I remember those days when parents didn't have to stick to us like Velcro! You have mixed tenses: sat, past; play, present.
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This beautifully nostalgic, delightful poem really resonates with me. How well I remember those days when parents didn't have to stick to us like Velcro! You have mixed tenses: sat, past; play, present.
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Janice thanks,I do indeed and will address it,
Comment from royowen
Well done, an excellent entry in this childhood contest. A lot of these items weren't around in my childhood years, but were in my children's years. Beautifully written in triplets and great rhyming in aba, articulate and well expressed, a vivid imagery post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Well done, an excellent entry in this childhood contest. A lot of these items weren't around in my childhood years, but were in my children's years. Beautifully written in triplets and great rhyming in aba, articulate and well expressed, a vivid imagery post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Thanks Roy!
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Welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Games We Played, presented in six ABA rhymed tercets, relive the joyous youth we had while never suspecting it would pass by and be so far away. But those times were splendid, and made us.
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This poem, Games We Played, presented in six ABA rhymed tercets, relive the joyous youth we had while never suspecting it would pass by and be so far away. But those times were splendid, and made us.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
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Bill, thank you, ahh the memories!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a fun jaunt down memory lane with SO MANY recollections here!! ;) :) And, imagine that, not a one of them electronic or needing batteries!! ;) :) A wonderful offering for the contest in a very effective format! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck ! :)
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What a fun jaunt down memory lane with SO MANY recollections here!! ;) :) And, imagine that, not a one of them electronic or needing batteries!! ;) :) A wonderful offering for the contest in a very effective format! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck ! :)
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
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Thank you, yes no batteries required.... aahhhh :)