Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "No Such Thing As Angels"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love Country and Western lyrics, they always tell a story. This is really good and I'd love to hear it sung. You obviously have a talent for writing songs, I am wondering if you have any published? Well done, a real pleasure to read. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
I love Country and Western lyrics, they always tell a story. This is really good and I'd love to hear it sung. You obviously have a talent for writing songs, I am wondering if you have any published? Well done, a real pleasure to read. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
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Comment from ravim
This is so amazingly beautiful. The country music ('am not too knowledgeable on this), as you say is classy that it takes the breath out of you. With all the frailties that you have, your wife still tolerates and loves you, you just succumb to her understanding and affection. There's no better angel in life. So poignantly written.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
This is so amazingly beautiful. The country music ('am not too knowledgeable on this), as you say is classy that it takes the breath out of you. With all the frailties that you have, your wife still tolerates and loves you, you just succumb to her understanding and affection. There's no better angel in life. So poignantly written.
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Comment from benoenose
Constructed with utmost care to keep the partner afresh with the changing world. So brightly exposed the natural beauty that we could only enjoy the love. No such wonder beyond this world of nature.
Read by nature poets and humanitarians.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
Constructed with utmost care to keep the partner afresh with the changing world. So brightly exposed the natural beauty that we could only enjoy the love. No such wonder beyond this world of nature.
Read by nature poets and humanitarians.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
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Comment from livelylinda
Brett: I love these lyrics! And, you didn't need to explain what they meant because the story is quite clear. I was once married to a functioning alcoholic but 16 years of it was too much for me and I needed to leave the situation for my own sanity. She may be an angel but one day she will go . . .Good writing and I can hear your song being sung by any of many great male country singers (or female) livelylinda
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
Brett: I love these lyrics! And, you didn't need to explain what they meant because the story is quite clear. I was once married to a functioning alcoholic but 16 years of it was too much for me and I needed to leave the situation for my own sanity. She may be an angel but one day she will go . . .Good writing and I can hear your song being sung by any of many great male country singers (or female) livelylinda
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Comment from Nosha17
They are very good lyrics, with a realistic story line, I can imagine such a scenario. Your rhyming is excellent and the message is very clear. Just wondered if you ever decided to get these published, I could probably help you with the meter and rhythm. I am a proof reader and editor by profession and pride myself on 'flawless meter and rhythm' in my own poetry (quote from my reviews). Most enjoyable. Faye
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They are very good lyrics, with a realistic story line, I can imagine such a scenario. Your rhyming is excellent and the message is very clear. Just wondered if you ever decided to get these published, I could probably help you with the meter and rhythm. I am a proof reader and editor by profession and pride myself on 'flawless meter and rhythm' in my own poetry (quote from my reviews). Most enjoyable. Faye
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Comment from robina1978
The artwork is absolutely beautiful and complements your lyric poem perfectly. I can't judge if it can be sung. But you give a clear message about alcoholism. Stopping is not easy, the wife is an angel. Rhymes all the way.
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The artwork is absolutely beautiful and complements your lyric poem perfectly. I can't judge if it can be sung. But you give a clear message about alcoholism. Stopping is not easy, the wife is an angel. Rhymes all the way.
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Comment from fimarie78
I agree with you. These lyrics are great.
When I took ill, my ex became an alcoholic and it is so hard.
I love the refrain.
In the same way as reading improves our writing, listening to country music will influence your lyrics.
You are very talented, my friend.
still want to hear them with a melody though :)
Fiona
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
I agree with you. These lyrics are great.
When I took ill, my ex became an alcoholic and it is so hard.
I love the refrain.
In the same way as reading improves our writing, listening to country music will influence your lyrics.
You are very talented, my friend.
still want to hear them with a melody though :)
Fiona
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
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Comment from CR Delport
They say the first step to help is realizing and accepting that you need help. This is very touching and very well written. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
They say the first step to help is realizing and accepting that you need help. This is very touching and very well written. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.
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Comment from Chris Tee
What a beautiful piece of lyrics which we have here! The song flows well and your refrain verse is absolutely great. Well done indeed with this proficient work
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What a beautiful piece of lyrics which we have here! The song flows well and your refrain verse is absolutely great. Well done indeed with this proficient work
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Comment from dmt1967
I liked this song. The only thing I didn't like was the over use of 'me.' It made the words to the song very jerky and stopped the otherwise smooth flow. Thank you for sharing. Well liked.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
I liked this song. The only thing I didn't like was the over use of 'me.' It made the words to the song very jerky and stopped the otherwise smooth flow. Thank you for sharing. Well liked.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
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