Breakfalupper
Have you eaten this meal?70 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
Are you saying that you have some critics. lol
It's just jealousy.
Yes, this was a ramble, Dean.
You're Breakfalupper sounds horrible. lol
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Are you saying that you have some critics. lol
It's just jealousy.
Yes, this was a ramble, Dean.
You're Breakfalupper sounds horrible. lol
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Thanks a "e". And boy, do I EVER have some critics, heh-heh...
I'm very happy to know you enjoyed my brief foray into the lighter, brighter side of life. Shucks, even I need to crawl away from my crusty crypt every now and again. It's really starting to reek in there!
Thanks so much again.
All my best
~Dean
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I know this is true from when I lived alone but my daughter stepped in to take care of me? Ahem. Well long story short she makes sure I recieve my meals on time. This is cute with special effects Dean. Well done. Nancy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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I know this is true from when I lived alone but my daughter stepped in to take care of me? Ahem. Well long story short she makes sure I recieve my meals on time. This is cute with special effects Dean. Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Thanks a bunch, Nancy. That sounds like it was lots'a ...fun? Okay, maybe not so much...
I'm quite pleased to know you enjoyed my brief foray into the lighter, brighter side of life. Shucks, even I need to crawl away from my crusty, crumbling crypt every now and again.
It's really starting to reek in there!
Thanks so much again.
All my best
~Dean
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. This reminds me of my army days. We had a thing called the all-in stew. That was basically what it was called. You got a pot and everything went into it because time was of the essence when you were on operations and exercise. Well done yet again. This is another piece that I can relate to. Time is of the essence when writing too and I am working, renovating and fixing a house and studying for a degree, so this is so true.
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This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of work. This reminds me of my army days. We had a thing called the all-in stew. That was basically what it was called. You got a pot and everything went into it because time was of the essence when you were on operations and exercise. Well done yet again. This is another piece that I can relate to. Time is of the essence when writing too and I am working, renovating and fixing a house and studying for a degree, so this is so true.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
Comment from Acquired Taste
Loved this and am still smiling. Your humorous side is as delightful as your serious side is horrifying. You score top honors in both genres.
Rhyming is terrific and artwork great - though I will admit, I was preparing myself for bludgeoned omelets at the end of your poem. Particularly loved your last lines: It matters little what you eat as long as you don't taste defeat. AT=/
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Loved this and am still smiling. Your humorous side is as delightful as your serious side is horrifying. You score top honors in both genres.
Rhyming is terrific and artwork great - though I will admit, I was preparing myself for bludgeoned omelets at the end of your poem. Particularly loved your last lines: It matters little what you eat as long as you don't taste defeat. AT=/
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
Comment from RGstar
I think this poem came from personal experience.Humorous and catching. Its the first time I have ever heard of ''Breakfalupper'' ...if in fact it is a term used.
I like the lightness of this one. Great animations.
Nice to see something light and airy from you, it gives a projection of all sides.
Well done.
RGstar
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I think this poem came from personal experience.Humorous and catching. Its the first time I have ever heard of ''Breakfalupper'' ...if in fact it is a term used.
I like the lightness of this one. Great animations.
Nice to see something light and airy from you, it gives a projection of all sides.
Well done.
RGstar
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
Comment from rspoet
I think you've finally made a breakthrough
And fans will be so grateful
No need to break for supper
just get down to the fillerupper
Fast food will never break you
it'll help you meet the curfew
in my day we call this noman's stew
for no man in his right mind
ever said, I'll have a breakfalupper
far, far from it
make mine a farfulupper
Excellent poem, graphics, fun, crow
Next we know
you'll be on Fallon, Kimmel or Colbert
Now that I'd like to see
Well done, my friend
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I think you've finally made a breakthrough
And fans will be so grateful
No need to break for supper
just get down to the fillerupper
Fast food will never break you
it'll help you meet the curfew
in my day we call this noman's stew
for no man in his right mind
ever said, I'll have a breakfalupper
far, far from it
make mine a farfulupper
Excellent poem, graphics, fun, crow
Next we know
you'll be on Fallon, Kimmel or Colbert
Now that I'd like to see
Well done, my friend
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
LOL. I enjoyed your poem. It has a great message for those who write and for those who do not know how to write acceptable reviews.
The artwork is so cute, but so fitting at the same time. I like how you spaced out the verses and interspersed them with the art. Good job on the rhyme, too.
You give the reader a good poem that has several poetic devices. Good job expressing your feelings in a way that is not condescending or ????
I see no changes. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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LOL. I enjoyed your poem. It has a great message for those who write and for those who do not know how to write acceptable reviews.
The artwork is so cute, but so fitting at the same time. I like how you spaced out the verses and interspersed them with the art. Good job on the rhyme, too.
You give the reader a good poem that has several poetic devices. Good job expressing your feelings in a way that is not condescending or ????
I see no changes. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Hahaha, no I didn't intend it to be condescending to anyone in any way, Jan. Just having a little light-hearted fun poking fun at myself, and all those who do the same thing.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one form my lighter side. Shucks, even I have to crawl out from out of my crumbling crypt sometimes. It really stinks in there!
Thanks again.
Always with respect,
~Dean :}
Comment from krys123
Dean;
-What I say??? With your very exceptional expertise in adding an atmosphere to your writing by using multiple three-dimensional and animated pictures and correlating them all with your words is just phenomenal.
-Don't get me wrong I know this takes time.
-Use of enjambment without a doubt.
-Superb exceptional rhyming were each of your rhyming words are contingent to the mean concept of each line which allows the rhythm to flow smoothly.
-Excellent rhythm where your cadence, timing and tempo for all helpful in making your reading clear, fluid and easy. And were most of your rhythm was in iambic form.
-The storyline and topic was very humorous and quite interesting, to say the least.
The concept was very imaginative which is phenomenally inventive and ingeniously creative.
-The imagery, among all others, was outstanding and exquisitely expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive throughout the writing.
-Thank you for sharing and posting this wonderful writing and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
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Dean;
-What I say??? With your very exceptional expertise in adding an atmosphere to your writing by using multiple three-dimensional and animated pictures and correlating them all with your words is just phenomenal.
-Don't get me wrong I know this takes time.
-Use of enjambment without a doubt.
-Superb exceptional rhyming were each of your rhyming words are contingent to the mean concept of each line which allows the rhythm to flow smoothly.
-Excellent rhythm where your cadence, timing and tempo for all helpful in making your reading clear, fluid and easy. And were most of your rhythm was in iambic form.
-The storyline and topic was very humorous and quite interesting, to say the least.
The concept was very imaginative which is phenomenally inventive and ingeniously creative.
-The imagery, among all others, was outstanding and exquisitely expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive throughout the writing.
-Thank you for sharing and posting this wonderful writing and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Dean - damn you! How can I not give a 6 for this - very amusing - great recipe a'hem! Great advice about dieting - get so wrapped up in writing that you forget to eat, Maybe!! This is not just well written, it is clever and gives some good advice - for example -
It matters little what you eat
as long as you don't taste defeat.
Just dodge your critic's harshest blows
then make them eat a little crow.
Great poem and it sounds to me that you are feeling quite chirpy, Warm regards Dorothy xx
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Hi Dean - damn you! How can I not give a 6 for this - very amusing - great recipe a'hem! Great advice about dieting - get so wrapped up in writing that you forget to eat, Maybe!! This is not just well written, it is clever and gives some good advice - for example -
It matters little what you eat
as long as you don't taste defeat.
Just dodge your critic's harshest blows
then make them eat a little crow.
Great poem and it sounds to me that you are feeling quite chirpy, Warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Are you kidding me? You stole my recipe. Damn you--you culinary plagiarist.
What would I do without eggs? Requiring no commitment beyond ten minute, I can usually combine the toast, scramble and toss with a bathroom break and I;m good to go for another four hours.
We're pathetic, you know.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Are you kidding me? You stole my recipe. Damn you--you culinary plagiarist.
What would I do without eggs? Requiring no commitment beyond ten minute, I can usually combine the toast, scramble and toss with a bathroom break and I;m good to go for another four hours.
We're pathetic, you know.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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So sorry 'bout that, Ingid. It was an unintentional culinary plagiarism, I swear!
I do the same thing as you do, only I make mine in a scrambled egg concoction. I'll take four eggs, some crumbled up toast, green peppers and onions, sharp cheddar cheese, sausage and bologna, a dab of 2% low-fat milk (to make me feel less guilty about the sausage and bologna ), then mix it all together and fry it up in a pan. You've got your protein, your dairy, your vegetables, and your bread. Viola...Breakfalupper!
How sweet is that?
But yeah, you're right. We are a bit pathetic, heh-heh...
Thanks for reviewing this one from my sillier side. My regular fan base is gonna rip me a new you-know-what for this one, I just know it, LOL!
~Dean :}