Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL! Love it! What a fun poem and illustration. They used to be in every sea-side shop along the sea-front. Sadly we don't see them much now. Good luck in the contest, and have a wonderful Christmas and a healthy, happy 2015! xsx sandra

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

You too Sandra, the same to you and yours, great review thanks, till next year,

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

This is a great entry into the no nonsense poem contest, I jus love the image, and the poem really fits the prompt

good luck in the contest
Mary

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks Mary for the great review and comments.

Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran

Excellent

A well written story poem I'm ot sure if there's a message within your poem or is it a as a humour, yes I think it's just humour. I love the picture and the characters in your poem. Mary.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

It's a nonsense poetry contest Mary, great review, thanks

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

I enjoyed this entry into the nonsense competition.
I found it very humorous, especially so when complimented with the art work.
Good structure and flow with excellent rhyming.

Good luck
GMG

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thank you for the the great review and comments.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahahahaha! Great little piece. I think it is a good contest entry and you should go well. I loved the picture also. I wish I could write in the short forms. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks Fez for this great review and comments

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

haha. lol. this is a nice piece of poetic art! very cute indeed. i especially like the line "in her tank there's no juice" even though it uses an inverted sentence.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
blessed holidays!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks Rebekka for the great review, great comments,

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

LOL. Awesome picture, and the writing in it, great. The poem rhymes nonchalantly. Really a fun read. Good luck with the contest. You should do well. Merry Christmas! Les

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks Les fotpr the great review,

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Very cute nonsense rhyme with an adorable illustration. Well chosen words and rhymes to convey your whimsical thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks Faye for the great review, and comments

Comment from Lovinia

Excellent

Hi Mystery Poet

What a great poem for the contest. Perfect image. Reads a little like a jingle or a nursery rhyme. Silly nonsense for sure. I expect your poem to be well appreciated and vie for the honours. Wishing you the best of luck.

Loved the rhyme and meter. Great wit. Absolute nonsense at its finest. lol Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thank you Lovi, for this comprehensive and encouraging review.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this poem, and the nonsense is creative and rather charming. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks Jeannie for the great review,