Comment from butterfly4265

Excellent

LOL! An excellent warning for us all - be careful who you kill! I love reviewing your work. It's always creepy in a fun way, and definitely entertaining :-) Even without the cool artwork this poem has excellent presentation, flow, rhyming and imagery that just makes you sit back and smile at the "coolness". Once again, very well done and, once again, very much enjoyed! S ;-)

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, Shona. I'm glad you enjoyed this, and as always, I appreciate your review. :}

~Dean

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

Dean, a very good story told in your poem. There are hints of Edgar Allan Poe. As always... rhyme, structure and presentation are excellent. It was a pleasure to read. I wish you well.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, Victor. I'm really glad you enjoyed this, and as always, I appreciate your review. :}

~Dean

reply by victor 66 on 18-Dec-2014

You are most welcome, Dean. Happy Holidays.

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014

A very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and your family as well, Victor.

Comment from dragonpoet

Good

This is a flowing, well rhymed poem that shows that you never get away with anything. There is always justice in the end. His victim causes his death and sends him where he belongs.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014

Hey, with reviews as grand as yours, why would I ever want to stop writing?

I'm ever so grateful for your comments and truly undeserving of your more than generous four star rating, especially coming from a poet and author of your immense talent and overwhelming popularity. I mean, look at all you've accomplished!

Wow, I'm speechless. Thanks again!

reply by dragonpoet on 10-Dec-2014

You are so very welcome, Dean. I am glad you like my writing.

Joan

reply by the author on 10-Dec-2014

:|

Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

You thought you had gotten away with the crime and could profit from it, but she definitely put an end to that illusion. In search of justice, she certainly refused to show any mercy.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, mark, and you got it, spot on!. I'm glad you enjoyed this, and, I really appreciate your review. :}

~Dean

Comment from JackiO

Excellent

This was very well written
Very cleverly written too,
You have found new ways of describing things such as
a heart attack and poisoning
and "slipped almond toxins in her tea"
perfectly executed, great imagery.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014

Thanks for taking the time to critique my work, JackiO, you are very kind. I'm very grateful for your feedback and kind comments. :}~Dean

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Dean. Once again you write with such a splendid story telling method that leaves me thinking about what it is you have to say. Your story poems are wonderfully witty and gory, but then fairy tales don't necessarily mean anything anyway now do they? Loved it. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, kiwigirl. I'm glad you enjoyed this, and as always, I appreciate your review. :}

~Dean

Comment from Caroline Yego

Exceptional

wow! A chilling story told in a poem. It felt like I was watching a horror movie. I like the narration and the pictures made it more vivid, especially the moving one. In life we can never escape karma.
Excellent!

Carol

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014

You're absolutely right, Caroline. Karma will always catch up with us in the end.

Thanks for the awesomely lovely review. I truly appreciate it!

~Dean

Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

Hi Dean, you have presented another of your dark masterpieces.

I cannot see any difference between the two. Perhaps it's been fixed.

I'm sure it could be a real scenario. This makes it all the more scarey.

The plot described so well in verse with striking presentation. Powerful, creative and with a great visual.
:) Mel.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014

Thanks so much, Mel. I'm very glad you enjoyed this, and as always, I appreciate your review. :}

~Dean

reply by write hand blue on 13-Dec-2014

My pleasure...

Comment from misscookie

Exceptional

I know it may sound weird that I 'm smiling.
It's because that the title of one my favorite TV shows I almost got away with. That's one of the reason I gave you a star.
The other reason you had my attention from the start her trilling her parasol blew my mind.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014

Thank you, misscookie. That's very kind of you to say, and I'm extremely grateful and happy you felt the piece was worthy.

It also happens to be one of the few television shows I watch, and I really enjoy it too. I get lots of my ideas for that show, LOL.

I'm very grateful for your very thoughtful review. :)

~Dean

reply by misscookie on 08-Dec-2014

Your very welcome. I' glad it is working for you with ideas.
Until next time.
Cookie

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2014

Until next time, then...adieu. 8-)

reply by misscookie on 08-Dec-2014

okay.
Cookie

Comment from jkrolling

Excellent

Clear, concise and very well written. I loved the presentation,it set the scene perfectly! well done and ,oh, I hope you're not writing this from experience!

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014

Ha, nope, jkrolling, thankfully I am not. Merely speculation at this point.

Thanks for the entertaining review. it's been a pleasure. :}

~Dean