Comment from JM daSilva

Excellent

I know some places like that. I love those places, actually. There was a time in my life that often visited those places for the psychic energy. I might go to this place. Thanks for the tip.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013

Sure my friend, but make sure you drop by to pick me up. I want to go with ya, too! (LOL).

Thanks for the great review, JM. Our family is planning on taking a trip out west next year, maybe Montana or Wyoming. We might just visit one of these old ghost towns!

reply by JM daSilva on 03-Nov-2013

It would be great. You'll have fun.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

I thought I smelt something BUT... luckily I
wasn't THAT scared.Lol.
A clever and crafty poem very fitting for
your chosen genre.
Expertly written and presented.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013

Ha ha, thank you very much seken58. I really appreciate that!

Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

My dearest friend, you are one of a kind, to give me the creeps just before an old lady wants to go to bed, and dream of a beautiful young handsome man sleep next to .
What do I get instead, a Ghost , a donation from my friend Dean, to sleep next to the old lady instead.

You do right amazing poetry, very one kind only coming from you. Now I do enjoy reading your Raven stories. Hugs Terry xxx

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013

Thanks very much, Terry, that is very nice of you to say. I only wish my fans enjoyed my stories as much as they do my poetry. Currently, my story, "~Right Down the Drain!~" is getting stomped in the Story of the Month contest. But, it was great to be nominated, at least.

Thanks so much again, Terry!

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

I think I'll move there. Sounds like my kind of place...Well, not really, but others seem to think so. And I think I know stinky...he lives in my black boot. See you on the dark side of the moon ( or is that in the shadow of devil's tower?) It'll be there tuning my guitar.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013

Take your pick, ravenblack. While I prefer the devil's tower, the dark side of the moon is truly lovely this time of year. So darks, so quiet and serene...but, either would be fine.

Thanks for the review, my fiend--ah, I meant friend...

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

SOUNDS LIKE A FUN PLACE FOR YOU TO GO AND INVESTIGATE FOR US AND TELL US ALL BOUT IT WHEN YOU COME BACK FROM HANGING WITH THE GHOSTS OF YESTERYEAR.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013

Thanks for the great review, country ranch writer!

Yeah, I would like to go there, just to hang around for a spell. It might be quite fun!



Pleasant Screams... heh heh

reply by country ranch writer on 02-Nov-2013

those are definitely not your legs bawahaaa

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013

;)

Nope, just another unsuspecting victim, hee-hee...

reply by country ranch writer on 03-Nov-2013

SLY FOX

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

You do seem to find the most interesting legends and spin the tales into eerie stories of your own. I do believe I will drive right past Raven's Fare if I'm ever in the area.

Thank you for another amazing tale of ghosts and creepy things.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013

Thanks so much, Debi, I am very grateful for such an outstanding review. I do believe I will drive right on past Raven's Fare myself, LOL...

Thanks again!

Comment from cinderbella

Excellent

No, sorry, it isn't where I would choose to go for a vacation. :)
The poem is great, and also very chilling. The artwork and audio are perfect complements to this one. I loved it. :) Sandra

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013

Thanks very much, Sandra. I'm really glad you liked this one!

I am thinking about ending these pictapoems and just going back to regularly formatted poems. I feel they have just about run their course. I have one left in "preview" mode. After that, I believe that will be it. What do you think, Sandra? Do you enjoy them enough for me to continue? They are extremely difficult to produce. Let me know, and thanks!

reply by cinderbella on 05-Nov-2013

To be honest, a nice piece of artwork with a poem is just as pleasurable as a pictapoem. I wouldn't know how to do a pictapoem myself, I like them okay, but mostly I appreciate the poem itself. :) As long as you keep writing the poems... :) Sandra

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Yes, there many abandoned Ghost towns about, all with a rich history some more myth than true. You make the town see the perfect for a Halloween Ghost town. The raven was thought to guide spirit to the afterlife. Apt name for such a town. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013

Thanks, lancellot. I am really glad you liked this one! I appreciate the insight and review.

Comment from ELumpkins

Excellent

Great post. The thing almost scared me out of writing this review. Some imagination, I enjoyed both the poem and the scare tatics>Music and whatever that was< Getting back to the poem, it is great, it is well written and is very easy to read if you don't get scared. Good work

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013

Hah, thanks very much, ELumpkins. You've just ran headlong into a formatted poem I've created called a PICTAPOEM ®. It's designed to draw the reader into the poem, make them feel as if they are a part of it. I do that through sounds, historical notes, etc. Just something to allow readers to have more of an experience, rather than simply reading and forgetting.

I am very glad you hung in there with it long enough to give me your honest opinion. I appreciate that, very much!

Comment from teafor2

Excellent

Dean Kuch--Of course, there is the excellent background pro-
vided by extensive author notes, expressive title, graphic
artwork and macabre theme that prepare readers for the gory,
yet poetic rendered details of murder and mayhem captured in
the morbid story/poem/account for eeriness associated with
particular landmarks. Another signature post by FanStory's
master of horror. Well done. teafor2

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013

Thanks, teafor2. I am very pleased that you enjoyed this one.

reply by teafor2 on 05-Nov-2013

You are welcome.