Along the Jericho Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Maya Moon"Murder Mystery
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Comment from judiverse
Very exciting work. Will Matthew's and private investigator Noff's interference be a help or hindrance to the Sheriff. Matthew wants to throw his money and influence around to find his father's killer. Aaron Noff seems full of himself. He does have a jump on Sheriff's department with his information about Father Brian. Sheriff Oleson doesn't seem like one to let these latecomers get the better of him and his department. Oh, that last scene is something, with the unknown perpetrator removing Fritz's eyes. Then he is startled by the threatening voice. Really spooky stuff. Exciting reading. judi
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Very exciting work. Will Matthew's and private investigator Noff's interference be a help or hindrance to the Sheriff. Matthew wants to throw his money and influence around to find his father's killer. Aaron Noff seems full of himself. He does have a jump on Sheriff's department with his information about Father Brian. Sheriff Oleson doesn't seem like one to let these latecomers get the better of him and his department. Oh, that last scene is something, with the unknown perpetrator removing Fritz's eyes. Then he is startled by the threatening voice. Really spooky stuff. Exciting reading. judi
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Hiya, judi. Thanks so much for your gracious and generous review. I sure appreciate the way you've hung in there with this novel. And I always enjoy getting your insights - especially about our hunky Sheriff. Hugs, Bev
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I've always been intrigued with this story. It seems that Father Brian has been holding back, so I'm keeping an eye on him! judi
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It would appear so. Thanks so much, Judi.
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You're so welocme. judi
Comment from robina1978
This one is certainly the most thrilling and dark chapter so far. Pity you posted today as my sixes don't arrive till tomorrow. The artwork is great and the chapter faultless.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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This one is certainly the most thrilling and dark chapter so far. Pity you posted today as my sixes don't arrive till tomorrow. The artwork is great and the chapter faultless.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Ine, thank you so much for this very gracious review. I appreciate your insights and generosity. Warmest regards, Bev
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very welcome as always, Bev.
Comment from Rondeno
Hi, Bev!
If I had a six, it would be yours. This novel is professional in its style and proficiency. I am extremely impressed. And I want to read more!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Hi, Bev!
If I had a six, it would be yours. This novel is professional in its style and proficiency. I am extremely impressed. And I want to read more!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Hi, Michael. Thank you so much, my friend, for your supportive and gracious review. I appreciate the virtual six very much. Means a lot! Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Bev,
The chapter is written very well with an abundance of action, conflict, suspense, and mystery. Matthew Buell threatens to up the stakes by offering a $10,000.00 reward as an incentive to find his missing father Fritz. This is in addition to hiring Aaron Noff, a private investigator.
We now know that Fritz is dead and partially dissected, apparently by the killer.
I found the chapter to be very interesting and challenging.
Curtis
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Bev,
The chapter is written very well with an abundance of action, conflict, suspense, and mystery. Matthew Buell threatens to up the stakes by offering a $10,000.00 reward as an incentive to find his missing father Fritz. This is in addition to hiring Aaron Noff, a private investigator.
We now know that Fritz is dead and partially dissected, apparently by the killer.
I found the chapter to be very interesting and challenging.
Curtis
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Curtis, thank you so much for taking time to read and generously review my chapter. I appreciate your support and kind insights. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from beccabootie123
wish I had a six left. gripping and held me from start to finish, cannot wait to read the next episode. the picture was haunting. formatted for easy reading. well done, priest pediphilia yet so much more. thank you for this read
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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wish I had a six left. gripping and held me from start to finish, cannot wait to read the next episode. the picture was haunting. formatted for easy reading. well done, priest pediphilia yet so much more. thank you for this read
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thank you! I really appreciate your warm and generous review, becca. More intrigue to come :0) Kind regards, Bev
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ur most welcome only speak to what I read
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hi dear,
Just one last review for the day!
A really good read, Bev. So Perry Mason-ish@
Spags:
leads it's generate (did you mean it's going to generate?)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Hi dear,
Just one last review for the day!
A really good read, Bev. So Perry Mason-ish@
Spags:
leads it's generate (did you mean it's going to generate?)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Hello, my friend. Thanks for your great review and catching my spaggie. I really appreciate your generosity and support. Hugs, Bev
Comment from c_lucas
Suggestion of a deceased energy at the end is duly noted. The "surgeon" is not a member of the medical profession. This is very well written.
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Suggestion of a deceased energy at the end is duly noted. The "surgeon" is not a member of the medical profession. This is very well written.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013
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Thanks so much, charlie. Appreciate your support :0) Bev
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You're welcome, Bev. Charlie