Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "This fellow's on the Square"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from c_lucas
The Masonic Symbol is as good as any symbol to be associated with one's name. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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The Masonic Symbol is as good as any symbol to be associated with one's name. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 22-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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thanks C
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You're welcome, Gary. Charlie
Comment from Ponder
Hi Deepwater,
I can think of no better way to be remembered than to be remembered for a life lived well, fairly and 'square'.
I liked this poem. The picture is unusual, is that the sign of the masons?
The poem itself reads well, flows well and is thought provoking, it made me think about how I'd like to be remembered
Jules
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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Hi Deepwater,
I can think of no better way to be remembered than to be remembered for a life lived well, fairly and 'square'.
I liked this poem. The picture is unusual, is that the sign of the masons?
The poem itself reads well, flows well and is thought provoking, it made me think about how I'd like to be remembered
Jules
Comment Written 22-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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masons Jules and thanks for reading
Comment from marcellawachtel
This is a well-constructed non-sentimental poem about how a man sees himself. He turns away from non-essentials and puts his finger on the essence; He wants to be remembered for his integrity. I enjoyed the writing, and the non-forced rhyming, and the shape of the verse as it appears in print.
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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This is a well-constructed non-sentimental poem about how a man sees himself. He turns away from non-essentials and puts his finger on the essence; He wants to be remembered for his integrity. I enjoyed the writing, and the non-forced rhyming, and the shape of the verse as it appears in print.
Comment Written 22-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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thank you for reading
Comment from jwlee211
Great message. I wonder how many understand being on the square. A very simple request but it means so much. Great work and enjoyed the poem
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reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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Great message. I wonder how many understand being on the square. A very simple request but it means so much. Great work and enjoyed the poem
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Comment Written 22-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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thank you Jw
