Comment from Sarah Probe S.

Exceptional

You deserve 6 stars ....what a cute poem for such an adorable little girl, we pray for the both of You, take care of yourselves and God bless You....
Sarah Probe

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025

Hi Sarah, Thank You sweet girl for a wonderful review...
and for all your lovely stars...

she is a precious baby...and I Thank You so much
for your prayers...she will need them to heal...
she will need God/Jesus to heal...

Thank You...and God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo 🙏🙏🤗❤️🌼

reply by Sarah Probe S. on 20-Mar-2025

you’re most welcome, thanks a million for your reply to my feedback, God bless You both 🩷🩵

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025

you are so welcome Sarah...
and God Bless you as well...love xxoo
🙏🤗❤️

reply by Sarah Probe S. on 20-Mar-2025

Cheers ! :) 🩵

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

"in her life sense she was" should this be (since she...)
What a gorgeous photo, it breaks our hearts to see such a little one with such restrictions, such a beautiful poem and read, and of course you will have my prayers, very well written and presented****kahpot

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025

Hi kahpot, Thank you so much for a wonderful review
my sweet friend...
and Thank You for your prayers...I know Eva is in Jesus's
hands...and it will be through pray that she will heal...
I believe in the power of prayer...
Thank You my friend...God Bless...love Linda xxoo 🙏🙏🤗❤️🌼

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Linda,

Prayers for Eva. It is always tragic when little ones are afflicted with illness.
I just see a couple of typos to fix:

Precious in the first line.
Sense = Since

Have faith that God will bring her through.

Kim

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025

Hi Kim, Thank You so much for your
review...it truly is sad when children
become so sick...she is in God's hands...
and I believe he will heal her...
Thank You for your help...love you...Linda xxoo 🙏🙏🤗🌼

Comment from jacquelyn popp

Exceptional

This poem is a heartbreaking yet powerful glimpse into the struggles of a young child facing epilepsy. The simple, rhythmic lines evoke deep sorrow, emphasizing the innocence of a baby whose life is forever changed by seizures. The contrast between the child's early days and the relentless progression of the condition makes the poem especially poignant. In just a few words, it captures the weight of a diagnosis, the helplessness of witnessing a little one suffer, and the sadness of a future altered too soon. It's a touching and deeply emotional piece.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025

Hi Jacquelyn, Thank You sweet girl for a wonderful
review...and for all your lovely stars...

I've taking care of this baby since she was born...it tears
my heart out every time she has a seizure...Thank You
so very much...God bless...love you....Linda xxoo 🙏🙏🌼🌼