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Acrostic-Loop poem41 total reviews
Comment from Brian Forsyth
Simple yet strong. I wonder if you considered trying Shakespeare and Angelo books as an image rather than the painting as the poem speaks of artists "penning" and "words." Or, mix a reference to paintings in? Just a thought.
I liked the way the poem rolled along, gathering speed.
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Simple yet strong. I wonder if you considered trying Shakespeare and Angelo books as an image rather than the painting as the poem speaks of artists "penning" and "words." Or, mix a reference to paintings in? Just a thought.
I liked the way the poem rolled along, gathering speed.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, and yes I was looking but not very good at locating work other than FS and can't even find any books****kahpot