Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

I know nothing about writing scripts, Patty - but have read it through and it all looks fine to me - I like the clever little story -- good luck with the contest, my friend.


Margaret

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017

Hi Margaret;

Thank you so much for reading. I'm just as blind as you - I looked at the entry posted by the creator of the contest and modeled my format after hers.

Thank you for the well wishes.

Hope today is a good day for you,

~patty~

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Aww, Patty, I wish I had a 6 left, this was so precious! I truly could see this playing out in front of me, it was superb! For your first script, it was brilliant. If you don't win, there is something wrong!! Very well done, my friend, and GOOD LUCK!! Sandra xxxx

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017

Hi Sandra;

Oh, thank you!! I'm so glad you could see the scene play out.

I will take your virtual six and wait for the voting to begin!

~patty~

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 16-Aug-2017

I'll watch out for the voting too! Loved yours! xxx

Comment from nbonner

Excellent

What a cute read. It takes me back to my early years playing in those sand boxes or watching my kids make sand castles at the beach. I really enjoyed reading it, Thank you for sharing and best wishes on the contest

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017

Hi;
thank you so much for the lovely review of my first script.

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and that it conjured up memories of your own sandbox experiences.

~patty~