Mental Floss
Should One Floss Daily?42 total reviews
Comment from crybry67
This is a really good read. I found your characters to be well defined, and very relatable. The story's flow was natural, didialogue flowed smoothly as well. Great piece. Blessings to you. .. Christy
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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This is a really good read. I found your characters to be well defined, and very relatable. The story's flow was natural, didialogue flowed smoothly as well. Great piece. Blessings to you. .. Christy
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, Christy. You are so kind to have read this with such closeness to detail. I appreciate it.
Comment from djsaxon
Jay. Dark maybe, but a terrific write. Your masterful pen is full of little "pings" throughout. Loved this:
"Mama's been noticing, lately, that mascara and blush'll do only so much, and her lipstick's been creeping up the little tributaries from her lips..." There are many more. DJ
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Jay. Dark maybe, but a terrific write. Your masterful pen is full of little "pings" throughout. Loved this:
"Mama's been noticing, lately, that mascara and blush'll do only so much, and her lipstick's been creeping up the little tributaries from her lips..." There are many more. DJ
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Coming from one whose opinion I respect, I honor this review and the six stars. Thank you so much, D.J.