2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "haiku (flash sonic boom and)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
66 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you choose to go with your poem, is awesome.
I love the commotion of the bright hues and lighten add those few powerful words.
You have created a perfect match.
Cookie
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
The artwork you choose to go with your poem, is awesome.
I love the commotion of the bright hues and lighten add those few powerful words.
You have created a perfect match.
Cookie
Comment Written 19-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you Miss Cookie I appreciate your awesome review. :)
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You're very welcome.
Have a blessed day.
Cookie
Comment from Gloria ....
Fantastic presentation, author. You've managed to get some thunder and lightning into your haiku.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
Fantastic presentation, author. You've managed to get some thunder and lightning into your haiku.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review. :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yeah, there's no manmade fireworks shows that are any more spectacular than those presented by Mother Nature. Storm watching during the warmer spring and summer months is one of my own personal favorite past times. It's amazing, and also totally free!
A well written haiku about lightning with a spectacular accompanying photograph.
Good luck in the booth.
~Dean :}
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
Yeah, there's no manmade fireworks shows that are any more spectacular than those presented by Mother Nature. Storm watching during the warmer spring and summer months is one of my own personal favorite past times. It's amazing, and also totally free!
A well written haiku about lightning with a spectacular accompanying photograph.
Good luck in the booth.
~Dean :}
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you Handsome, I appreciate your kind words and the awesome review. :)
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You're more than welcome, my dear friend.
~Dean :}
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. Good job on the syllable count. The artwork is awesome. I like the presentation. Good job and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
I enjoyed your poem. Good job on the syllable count. The artwork is awesome. I like the presentation. Good job and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review. :)
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is an amusing and delightful haiku. I liked that you added the adventure of a sonic boom to enhance the meaning of your words. It was easy to envision the scene and your ending was especially delightful.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
This is an amusing and delightful haiku. I liked that you added the adventure of a sonic boom to enhance the meaning of your words. It was easy to envision the scene and your ending was especially delightful.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review. :)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Especially intense lightning and thunder storms do sound like a sonic boom, and the spark is very much like a powerful zap of electricity - apt description and a wonderful. satori. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
Especially intense lightning and thunder storms do sound like a sonic boom, and the spark is very much like a powerful zap of electricity - apt description and a wonderful. satori. Best of luck.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you! I appreciate the awesome review and kind words. :)
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My pleasure.
Comment from kittykatnoel
Oohh!! Ahhh!! Beautiful poem, I can feel the words and see the lightening flashing. Wonderful job with this haiku, you've really made the lightening come to life in a few syllables.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
Oohh!! Ahhh!! Beautiful poem, I can feel the words and see the lightening flashing. Wonderful job with this haiku, you've really made the lightening come to life in a few syllables.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you! I appreciate the awesome review and kind words. :)
Comment from Zue65
The poem and the art work complement each other which helped reinforced the message intended for the readers. An excellent write. All the best, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
The poem and the art work complement each other which helped reinforced the message intended for the readers. An excellent write. All the best, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you nassus, I really appreciate your awesome review. :)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
_ Excellent entry for the contest.
_ Terrific picture that complements your haiku.
_ Presentation is sop ton target. Good luck.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
Hi,
_ Excellent entry for the contest.
_ Terrific picture that complements your haiku.
_ Presentation is sop ton target. Good luck.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you Jax, I really appreciate your awesome review. :)
Comment from Unspoken94
Excellent haiku. The poems I have reviewed
so far in this contest have
been very creative and stunning.
I don't know if he contest is still going on
but if it is, I wish you well. -Bill
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
Excellent haiku. The poems I have reviewed
so far in this contest have
been very creative and stunning.
I don't know if he contest is still going on
but if it is, I wish you well. -Bill
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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I really appreciate your awesome review. :)