Darling Miss Muppet
A tale of sorrow72 total reviews
Comment from Alan K Pease
Sometimes I feel like a lost child especially when I am racking my mind figuring out what to buy for my Grandchildren's Christmas -things that are both interesting and educational for a child of their age - 3 yrs, 4 yrs, 6 yrs, and 17yrs ( 2 families ). Merry Christmas to you and yours. Clever poem
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
Sometimes I feel like a lost child especially when I am racking my mind figuring out what to buy for my Grandchildren's Christmas -things that are both interesting and educational for a child of their age - 3 yrs, 4 yrs, 6 yrs, and 17yrs ( 2 families ). Merry Christmas to you and yours. Clever poem
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thanks Alan for the wonderful review, words and great stars,
Comment from emrpoems
Short sweet and really funny
Even you will deduce
in her tank there's no juice
Oh boy! How wrong can you be. Can you get more funny thn this??
Good use of rhymed couplets with the 3rd and 6th lies rhyming
Wish you all the best in the contest
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
Short sweet and really funny
Even you will deduce
in her tank there's no juice
Oh boy! How wrong can you be. Can you get more funny thn this??
Good use of rhymed couplets with the 3rd and 6th lies rhyming
Wish you all the best in the contest
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thank you for the great review and comments
Comment from billmetz
This is very nice, made me giggle. Like the rhyme sequence. I like the part about her needing glasses. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
This is very nice, made me giggle. Like the rhyme sequence. I like the part about her needing glasses. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for this great review and comments
Comment from Kingsland
Well, I believe you stated this clearly as a nonsensical piece of poetic art. Still, it is a very good write that has some good humor in its thoughts. I enjoyed reading this well written piece of poetic art... John
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
Well, I believe you stated this clearly as a nonsensical piece of poetic art. Still, it is a very good write that has some good humor in its thoughts. I enjoyed reading this well written piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thanks John for this great review, my friend
Comment from RYME4U
Very silly and humorous. I love the way you have presented this poem. It is exactly what the "nonsense poetry" contest is all about. Great job!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
Very silly and humorous. I love the way you have presented this poem. It is exactly what the "nonsense poetry" contest is all about. Great job!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thank you for this great review and comments,
Comment from thee-name
Excellent poem. Writing was funny.
OH, OUR DARLING MISS MUFFET
THINKING SHE WAS A PUPPIT
PLAINLY NEEDS GLASSES TO SEE;
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
Excellent poem. Writing was funny.
OH, OUR DARLING MISS MUFFET
THINKING SHE WAS A PUPPIT
PLAINLY NEEDS GLASSES TO SEE;
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thanks for the lovely review and comments.
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THANK YOU!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is funny in a way. She is a bit blind, I agree. In then end are you saying she knew all along?
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
This is funny in a way. She is a bit blind, I agree. In then end are you saying she knew all along?
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Er no! Thanks for the review and taking the time, what is the problem?
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You're welcome, Roy.
Joan
Comment from Lulube
cute and well penned. Yes I laughed at this one, cleverly worded, eg. her tank has no juice. lol
good rhyming and good flow to the read
good luck in the contest
Merry
X'mas
and all the best in the New Year
lulube
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
cute and well penned. Yes I laughed at this one, cleverly worded, eg. her tank has no juice. lol
good rhyming and good flow to the read
good luck in the contest
Merry
X'mas
and all the best in the New Year
lulube
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thanks Lu for this lovely review and comments,
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welcome
lulube
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
It's funny due to its being nonsense.
It fulfills the required norms.
Wording is simple and perfectly matching with the theme.
Smooth flow with nice rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
Hello Friend,
It's funny due to its being nonsense.
It fulfills the required norms.
Wording is simple and perfectly matching with the theme.
Smooth flow with nice rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thanks RP for the the great review and comments,
Comment from c_lucas
Adoption leaves the reciplicant uneasy until they can assimilate with their adoptive parents. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
Adoption leaves the reciplicant uneasy until they can assimilate with their adoptive parents. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thanks Charlie, for this great review and comments,
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You're welcome, Sasha. Charlie