The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 73 "Snow-bound reverie (5-7-5)"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Oh, yes. We are in the below zero range with snow expected. Great 5/7/5 and a good contest entry. Your presentation is outstanding. Take care, my friend~Debbie
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Oh, yes. We are in the below zero range with snow expected. Great 5/7/5 and a good contest entry. Your presentation is outstanding. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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You stay warm girl, and don't get out there on your snow-board. :-) I know it is colder where you are, but we keep dropping. Larry and I leave for Phoenix on the 18th, warmer weather but we go over the mountains to get there. BRRRRRRRRRRR...Have a great week Debbie, your friend, Carolyn
Comment from nivedh
i can give you 1000 stars if i have.
very nice explanation you have given in three lines.
format is right.
all the best for the contest.
you know one thing i am also in this contest.
my poem is ocean and life.
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i can give you 1000 stars if i have.
very nice explanation you have given in three lines.
format is right.
all the best for the contest.
you know one thing i am also in this contest.
my poem is ocean and life.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Good luck to you too nivedh, maybe one of us will win. LOL I wish you all the best. Thanks for the wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from MoIronE13
These 5- 7-5 poems are so hard for Me to completely wrap my head around. My heart and spirit get it, but then the mind is always the one giving me grief.
I enjoyed he picture you painter with the words.
I the nocturnal head trip = does this translate to the reveries of the crystal dream???
Here is no last observation , which I never know how to count these syllable things, but is the 2nd line = to 8 syllables???
Thanks for sharing..
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These 5- 7-5 poems are so hard for Me to completely wrap my head around. My heart and spirit get it, but then the mind is always the one giving me grief.
I enjoyed he picture you painter with the words.
I the nocturnal head trip = does this translate to the reveries of the crystal dream???
Here is no last observation , which I never know how to count these syllable things, but is the 2nd line = to 8 syllables???
Thanks for sharing..
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thanks for reading and commenting. It seems you got the meaning, and the 2nd line is 7 syllables. I appreciate your time, :-) Carolyn
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I am glad that I can't count those darn syllables..
Cheers.
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cheers back to you, do I get a better rating now. LOL
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Let me think on it????
Ok!!!
LOL
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the freeze that covers your ground while we're going through a heat wave. send us some 20 degree cooler weather.
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this is very well written, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the freeze that covers your ground while we're going through a heat wave. send us some 20 degree cooler weather.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Twill do, where are you located? I will bucket it up and send it right there. Thanks for the great review. :-) Carolyn
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i'm in jacksonville florida.
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Hey I have been there, nice. Don't over heat. :-)
Comment from country ranch writer
Florida sunshine here no snow will trade for some haha I haven't seen snow since 59 and my hubby hasn't never seen snow
so he wouldn't know what to do with it hehe
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Florida sunshine here no snow will trade for some haha I haven't seen snow since 59 and my hubby hasn't never seen snow
so he wouldn't know what to do with it hehe
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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How about trading 2 weeks at a time, LOL. Thanks for this entertaining and great review. :-) Carolyn
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lol