Comment from ProjectBluebook

Excellent

Jeepers creepers! If I had six stars you would get it. Excellent, man! this is really sensational! That's the creepest picture I ever saw and the sound effects are great! Personally, I think you should win this 100 word contest. You got my vote! That cat sure looks scary! Man---I might not sleep tonight---gee---whiz. It's all good, I hope you win, you deserve it! good luck in the contest, wackydo

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013

Thanks a zillion, Wackydo! I am very glad that you liked this "CREEPY" little poem...

Happy Halloween to you, and yours!

reply by ProjectBluebook on 26-Oct-2013

Thanks to you---I'm shaking in my boots! you got my vote!

Comment from Nichola

Excellent

Oohh, I like. Very creepy and haunting! The special effects sounds are especially nice and complement your poem terrifically. Good luck in the contest. Nichola

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013

Thanks so much, for the review, kind comments and well wishes, Nichola. I sincerely appreciate it!

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Outstanding scenery, sounds, pictures, and a poem that bests them all. I enjoyed this most of all the numerous poem from the prompt. Thanks for an enjoyable read!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013

Thanks so much, Ric! I certainly appreciate that!

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

LOL we know who this is even without the music. Who else writes of such demonic frightening terror? I'll betcha this guy is not half as bad as he seems.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013

Thanks, Gungalo! I don't know how anyone would be able to possibly identify who wrote this. I suppose it shall forever remain a mystery, LOL...

reply by Gungalo on 26-Oct-2013

I know though. LOL

Comment from way2gokev

Excellent

Wow! very good work with rather gruesome art work that enhances the poem. Should be a winner in the contest or rate very highly. Your poem expresses the horror and leaves one with the thought of never having to experience such an event.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013

Thanks so much for the fantastic review, way2gokev!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

dark castle's icy keep - add apostrophe for possessive
vivid detail of mood-setting detail
nice touches of alliteration
good assonance in deep demon's sleep
solid use of rhyming couplets
a chilling horror poem :-) Brooke

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013

Thank you, Brooke. I've made those corrections, and I certainly appreciate your review and feedback on this!