A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "~Ode to the Sea~"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
66 total reviews
Comment from Ridley Williams
Nice, Dean, this was a great sea faring adventure. Think I even brought a little sand home in my slippers, hee hee, and I agree. The adventure starts right between the ears; it takes imagination to read our work and to appreciate the thought. Well done on this write, my friend, Bill
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Nice, Dean, this was a great sea faring adventure. Think I even brought a little sand home in my slippers, hee hee, and I agree. The adventure starts right between the ears; it takes imagination to read our work and to appreciate the thought. Well done on this write, my friend, Bill
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Hey, sand in the slippers, that's great! And all from your imagination. Hey, ya' can't get any better than that!
Comment from tbacha58
Wow, what an amazing journey you took us, with the ocean waves,
your unforgettable poem, your self assurance, what a master piece again and again. Loved Dean. Thank you. Bless u Terry
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Wow, what an amazing journey you took us, with the ocean waves,
your unforgettable poem, your self assurance, what a master piece again and again. Loved Dean. Thank you. Bless u Terry
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review, Terry, I truly appreciate it!
Comment from songbyrd
This is just awesome. Your words, the journey taken, the beautiful image used and even the sounds of the ocean and the sea gulls. You really did a great job showing much creativity and originality. You get a 6 from me my friend..
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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This is just awesome. Your words, the journey taken, the beautiful image used and even the sounds of the ocean and the sea gulls. You really did a great job showing much creativity and originality. You get a 6 from me my friend..
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thanks, songbird. I am very glad that you "connected" with this one!
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I just love this, Dean - the poem, the presentation
and the sound effects are all most impressive....
I felt I was there listening.
As always, your talent shines through.
Margaret
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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I just love this, Dean - the poem, the presentation
and the sound effects are all most impressive....
I felt I was there listening.
As always, your talent shines through.
Margaret
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you very much, Margaret. I am very happy that you enjoyed reading it...
Comment from Gungalo
Beautifully done Dean. A story of the sea and all she holds. There is promise of even more if you are willing to go there. Wonderful I say.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Beautifully done Dean. A story of the sea and all she holds. There is promise of even more if you are willing to go there. Wonderful I say.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Gungalo. It's very much appreciated!
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Smile.
Comment from lindalcreel
If I close my eyes and listen to the sounds, I find myself on the sea with the waves crashing around. I'm sorry I didn't play this at night, it would have had an awesome effect. As usual, your poems are always brilliant. Thanks for sharing. This was enjoyable.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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If I close my eyes and listen to the sounds, I find myself on the sea with the waves crashing around. I'm sorry I didn't play this at night, it would have had an awesome effect. As usual, your poems are always brilliant. Thanks for sharing. This was enjoyable.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Brilliant? Well, that's quite a compliment Linda, I really appreciate that. I don't think of myself as "brilliant", but I do try always to shine!
Thanks so much again for this outstanding review!
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You are brilliant and it's time that you realize it.
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You've got me blushing
Comment from Treischel
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Wonderful nautical visualizations and very creative verse. I see you needed to darken some text to see it against the light parts of the background. Your rhyme scheme was variable, but that didn't matter at all as it flows so well. Ode to the sea, and call to the imagination blend perfectly thematically. Visually impressive picture poem. Very nice!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thanks for weighing in on this one for me, Mr. 'T'. I really appreciate your insights and wonderful review!
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Well, for sure we can say we enjoy our trip to the sea with you and the sound and layout was perfect and it didn't scare the wits out of us, makes us wish we had a six for this one but we're all out. They moved Miss Evelyn to the rehab center yesterday. If the Lord lays on your heart to send her a card she loves showing off her cards from her fanstory family. God loves you and we do too. Shes at Hiram Shaddox - Geriatrics Center - 620 hospital drive - Mountain Home, Ar 72653 Room 110/Evelyn Stewart. I sneak that message in and Miss Evelyn can't see what I'm doing. I don't have to tell everything. haha. God bless. janie
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Well, for sure we can say we enjoy our trip to the sea with you and the sound and layout was perfect and it didn't scare the wits out of us, makes us wish we had a six for this one but we're all out. They moved Miss Evelyn to the rehab center yesterday. If the Lord lays on your heart to send her a card she loves showing off her cards from her fanstory family. God loves you and we do too. Shes at Hiram Shaddox - Geriatrics Center - 620 hospital drive - Mountain Home, Ar 72653 Room 110/Evelyn Stewart. I sneak that message in and Miss Evelyn can't see what I'm doing. I don't have to tell everything. haha. God bless. janie
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for your fantastic review, Janie! I truly appreciate it, and hope your mother is doing well...
God bless...
~Dean~
Comment from alexgeorge
What can I possibly say to this? Dean, you are travelling on a new plane, my friend. You have reached new heights of creativeness and with your pictapoems, we soar like eagles above the world gazing at its splendor, travelling--in this poem--over the seas, feeling the wind on our feathers and the brine in our beaks.
Awesome work!
Wish I could give you ten golden cups of glory for this, however a humble six star is the best I can come up with.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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What can I possibly say to this? Dean, you are travelling on a new plane, my friend. You have reached new heights of creativeness and with your pictapoems, we soar like eagles above the world gazing at its splendor, travelling--in this poem--over the seas, feeling the wind on our feathers and the brine in our beaks.
Awesome work!
Wish I could give you ten golden cups of glory for this, however a humble six star is the best I can come up with.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thanks for your wonderful review, my friend! Our move is nearly complete, and I have more time to jump on FS once in awhile. Sorry I have not been able to review the Golden Menace, this new internet service is very...squirrely for lack of a better term. I know I have fallen so far behind on so many stories because of our move, it's not funny! I will get back to reading and reviewing more. I've had a couple of projects of my own in the works, and between working on them, and moving...Oh, have mercy!
Thanks so much again, Alex. I haven't forgotten you buddy!
Comment from NicciFaye
My favortive horror writer here on FanStory. I've missed you my friend. This is an excellent piece. You are a talent none the less and such big imagination. The artwork is excpectionally well and perfect for this poem. It amazes me how the mind always seems to go right into the tone that you've set for reading...me pirate voice...lol...well written.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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My favortive horror writer here on FanStory. I've missed you my friend. This is an excellent piece. You are a talent none the less and such big imagination. The artwork is excpectionally well and perfect for this poem. It amazes me how the mind always seems to go right into the tone that you've set for reading...me pirate voice...lol...well written.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Yeah, we've been moving, Nicci, and I am sure you know what that's like. I loathe moving, but it is a much nicer & larger place. Look for the new chapter of Ouija's Kube, coming in a couple of days, tops!
Thanks for your fantastic review!