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Comment from DanielEkine
What a great finish to a remarkable poem. Nicely done.
My best part, "I felt my heart restrict again
I watched your parents cry
I watched and died a little bit
And then I asked God, 'Why?'"
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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What a great finish to a remarkable poem. Nicely done.
My best part, "I felt my heart restrict again
I watched your parents cry
I watched and died a little bit
And then I asked God, 'Why?'"
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Daniel, for your lovely review! :)