HeART Dreams
About attaining your full potential...46 total reviews
Comment from Jina Sarma
-Wonderfully written poem. What a use of words!Specially rhymes are out of the world. A poem that taken my heart away.Sentences are magically good.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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-Wonderfully written poem. What a use of words!Specially rhymes are out of the world. A poem that taken my heart away.Sentences are magically good.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you for a thoughtful and lovely reply. I really appreciate you taking the trouble to read it all - and then to enjoy it too!
Comment from McMurry903
I love your poem and completly agree with the message. This is a wonderful contest entry and I wish you the very best of luck!! Brian :)
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I love your poem and completly agree with the message. This is a wonderful contest entry and I wish you the very best of luck!! Brian :)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you for such a kind review.
Comment from Florrie
A good lesson in parenting written with excellent rhyme and reason. Very profound advice for all parents, especially the last two lines. florrie
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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A good lesson in parenting written with excellent rhyme and reason. Very profound advice for all parents, especially the last two lines. florrie
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you Florrie, I am flattered that you liked it! I see that you were born in 1927 - that makes you:
1. 85 years old
2. Quite remarkable for your age!
I am truly impressed with your computing ability.
Thanks again.
Comment from ocruickshank
I totally agree people should follow their hearts, as the daughter of immigrants security is more important. But, we should allow fear to live alongside our dreams or instill it in our children. The poem really made me feel inspired. I also enjoyed the flow and structure, great job!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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I totally agree people should follow their hearts, as the daughter of immigrants security is more important. But, we should allow fear to live alongside our dreams or instill it in our children. The poem really made me feel inspired. I also enjoyed the flow and structure, great job!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you for a great review. The ARTwork is mine.
Comment from 4tulips
Oh if only we could start all over again with the knowledge we have now. I would think we have learned some lessons and would change them if given another chance. But even knowing this will help us to teach our children and guide them to be what they want to pursue. They need to go and believe in themselves and make mistakes, not regrets trying to please others. I enjoyed your poem for this contest.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Oh if only we could start all over again with the knowledge we have now. I would think we have learned some lessons and would change them if given another chance. But even knowing this will help us to teach our children and guide them to be what they want to pursue. They need to go and believe in themselves and make mistakes, not regrets trying to please others. I enjoyed your poem for this contest.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you for this wonderful review.
Comment from Deborah Marie
Beautiful photo. Where did you find it? It fits well with your poem and you wanting to go into the art field. You follow your writing prompt nicely. I'm making sure my daughter experiences life and follows her dreams... Now in online college I know she will. Nice color scheme but, I would have a tendency to change your yellow words to maybe black. The yellow distracts this readers eye. Nice job and good luck in your contest.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Beautiful photo. Where did you find it? It fits well with your poem and you wanting to go into the art field. You follow your writing prompt nicely. I'm making sure my daughter experiences life and follows her dreams... Now in online college I know she will. Nice color scheme but, I would have a tendency to change your yellow words to maybe black. The yellow distracts this readers eye. Nice job and good luck in your contest.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you Deborah for a lovely review. The artwork is my own. I have just put this online now - and have been fiddling around with the colour settings - so the writing is not yellow anymore. Thanks for taking the time to read this longish one!