Dig A Pony
A story43 total reviews
Comment from Joe Hudson
Wonderful! When I saw the title I instantly thought of the Beatles and was pleasantly surprised that was the core of the piece. I loved it. Such work. You had to have put a lot of thought and work into this for it to flow so smoothly given all the references you used. I just love that. You know if this got out on YouTube or something I think it would find it's niche audience. Lovely and creative and quirky and oh, so well done. Great job! Joe
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Wonderful! When I saw the title I instantly thought of the Beatles and was pleasantly surprised that was the core of the piece. I loved it. Such work. You had to have put a lot of thought and work into this for it to flow so smoothly given all the references you used. I just love that. You know if this got out on YouTube or something I think it would find it's niche audience. Lovely and creative and quirky and oh, so well done. Great job! Joe
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Joe, thank you once again!! It was so much fun to write!! thank you thank you... jimi
Comment from Dave M
Jimi,
You used a lot more than twenty Beatle titles and wrote a wacky tale that reeks of the late Sixties. You also used a lot of song titles that were not from the Beatles, but you didn't use boldface to highlight them. I enjoyed reading this post and have several comments:
"Oh, that sweet Southern bell [belle, a borrowed French word]."
"Well, that little Southern bell [belle] had the nerve to say..."
"I remember how Sweet Georgia Brown (a hard line break should come out)
delivered a fine tribute called A Day In The Life."
"When The Saints Come Marching In." Only the first three words are boldface in your text.
"...whose name was Blue Jay Jay [Way]."
Dave
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Jimi,
You used a lot more than twenty Beatle titles and wrote a wacky tale that reeks of the late Sixties. You also used a lot of song titles that were not from the Beatles, but you didn't use boldface to highlight them. I enjoyed reading this post and have several comments:
"Oh, that sweet Southern bell [belle, a borrowed French word]."
"Well, that little Southern bell [belle] had the nerve to say..."
"I remember how Sweet Georgia Brown (a hard line break should come out)
delivered a fine tribute called A Day In The Life."
"When The Saints Come Marching In." Only the first three words are boldface in your text.
"...whose name was Blue Jay Jay [Way]."
Dave
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Dave, oops type o for Blue Jay Way and thanks for pointing out the errors.. I edit and edit and it drives me crzy. Yes, it was wack and fun.. thank you sweet friend.. jimi
oh and the hard line break is evil eddie messing with me, I have tried to fix it..
Comment from doris1022
That makes for a long poem. nice writing ou have penned. keep the pen flowing for creativity and entertainment. have a fine week.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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That makes for a long poem. nice writing ou have penned. keep the pen flowing for creativity and entertainment. have a fine week.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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hi doris1022, thank you for reading along.. I hope it came across as a story and not a poem.. lol.. again thank you so much... jlsavell