Better Watch Out For The Bears!
A lesson about making a mess.....41 total reviews
Comment from Josipher32
Begin Again,
"Better Watch Out For the Bears!" was a well written chilren's fictional piece. The vocabulary and dialogue was suitable for a child's audience. The picture was precious. Nice job.
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
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Begin Again,
"Better Watch Out For the Bears!" was a well written chilren's fictional piece. The vocabulary and dialogue was suitable for a child's audience. The picture was precious. Nice job.
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
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Josipher
Thank you so much...This story just kind of popped into my head this morning. Trying to teach a few lessons while they are young, I guess. Thanks for the review. Carol
